its really nice,i love the story,hope you continue with the wedding.

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That was great, and I can't wait for your next chapter!

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I love this chapter. I think that the Jimmy character and what Harry is doing for him is great.

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great story i love it keep on wrighting

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That was very cool. However, you should get a beta, fot those spelling mistakes.

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Awesdome. You rock. :P

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That was also briliant. Toodles!

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That was great. Just great.

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That was awesome. You have a real talent for writing.

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I wonder... What will the dursley's do?

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That was beautiful, just beautiful.

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I loved it. Wonderful job.

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aw i like this story its really good i was wondering wen the next chapters out cuz it brill

the score reflects the whole story

tp bk :):0

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Same song second verse, grammar, spelling

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Good story , but still bad English - someone needs to read or word smith your story.

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Very nice chapter. It looks like you have things moving forward. Please post soon

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Lots better, You need to watch your grammar and sentence structure.

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Better, still a little fragmented.

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OKAY, a little better.

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Not bad for now, however, I hope it gets better, your writing is still sketchy at best.

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Way to go...can't wait to read more. I took time to read this fanfic instead of studying for my finals which I will have today. Since it is 1:17am. lol. But it kept my attention and I couldn't stop.

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The story is starting to get scratchy, what I mean is there is not a central theme, just bits and pieces, like random thoughts. I hope it gets better.

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WOW, good story, still need so fluff with Harry and Ginny. Othere that that keep up the good work.

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OKAY, so far so good, I would expect a little more inter play between Harry and Ginny. This is a story about Harry & Ginny, please don't separate them.

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Your grammar and sentence structure is not good. It ruins a good story that you have created. You should think about finding a beta and rereading your work.

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