what, now im confused... why did you say Harry had hazel eyes? he has green or is that a part of the plot... im confused... so nobody at Hogwarts knows Harry? please hurry and update

~hlj

Author's Response: it is all part of the plot ^-^
you will, hopefully, understand after the next chapter though it may take a while.
thanks for sticking with this and for this review
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that was nice it was a bit rushed and you could add more detail... the banner drew me to this story for some reason(dont know why)... i hope you continue with it. ~hlj

Author's Response: i will continue, thank you for the support and the review
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Absolutely beautifully written first chapter. Maybe you should make the next chapter a bit longer? Although I admit that's just so I can read more :o)

Author's Response: thanks for the review, the next one my be slightly longer i am glad that you enjoyed it
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I loved the descriptiveness of this chapter. Your spelling and grammar were both good, I only noticed two spelling errors: you wrote dieing instead of dying, and in the second last line you wrote had instead of hand (though this was most likely a typing error). On the whole, a great chapter.

Author's Response: thanks for the time you spent giving me this review it means a lot to me, i am glad that you liked it
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