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Review #1, by dennisud

29th December 2007:

Too quick and a bit convoluted here. This should have stretched at least 5 chapters to this point. That means you left a lot out and that this was a bit rushed.

Please consider rewriting it.

Author's Response: Im sorry to hear that, but Im just writing for fun.

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Review #2, by Fanfair

Chappie 2

29th December 2007:

I liked how your having Harry think through his thought your doing a wonderful job please do continue

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Review #3, by DangerDog

Chappie 2

29th December 2007:

Ooh nice introductions! I like stories like this, but I keep thinking about the kids. They are gonna be a huge obstacle in writing this love story! I am interested in seeing how you get past that boundary. And what of Teddy Lupin? Surely he will make an appearance!!

Author's Response: Thanks... you know he just might.. for you ;)

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Review #4, by chinery13

Chappie 2

29th December 2007:

Fabulous start to what i can see as a great story. I can't wait to find out what will happen between harry and hermione. good job.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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Review #5, by chinery13

Kindlings of Multiple Natures

10th October 2007:

I like it it goes a bit too fast but other than that i am liking it so far write more please.

Author's Response: I know it does.. and im working on it.. thanks :)

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Review #6, by Fanfair

Kindlings of Multiple Natures

9th September 2007:

interesting please do continue

Author's Response: thanks... im working on it :)

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