Sounds like it could be an interesting story. I wondered how Harry would get past the encounter without Voldie trying to kill him, but you played it off rather nicely, all things considered. Its actually, (dare I say this about a LV/HP fic) believable. There, I said it. Now, please update soon, ok? Report Review
woot! I like it
-Raydear Report Review
I must say that this is a good beginning! I'm not sure I like Harry/Voldemort pairings but you have intrigued me so I will be keeping an eye out for further updates. I really want to know whats gonna happen between these two, please update soon! Report Review
Interesting. Keep going!! Report Review
well this is weird...they're wery polite aren't they...considering they've been trying to kill each other for quite some time now. but it is interesting. please continue soon. Report Review
Nice. I like it. And I still call Tom Tommy ( the last is an afterthought to me.) Report Review
sweet but short write more??? Report Review
Hello. Big fan of slash myself saw your story and stopped by and read.
Um, well, one a big thing I would change would be how you keep your character in character, you know?
Readers WANT to believe that this could happen, thinking, "That would be so like him!"
Yeah, interactions are not so good.
But hey, I kinda started out taht way and basically, this could be a thing you notice over time... maybe not. ^^
Anyway, nice story and I cant help but want to see what will happen next.
Missy Padfoot Report Review
e i like it a lot. update soonAuthor's Response: Thank you and hopfully I will. Report Review
roflmfao!!! this chapter is hilarious! so wait voldemort can just walk into diagon aley, and no one will recognise him? isn't he kinda snake looking, and the whole red eyes thing can be pretty recognisable. or does he look like tom riddle? still, why is he nice to harry? shouldn't he be trying to kill him and stuff? please do continue soon.Author's Response: Yes he loks like Tom Riddle and no one knows he is Tom Riddle except Dumbledork and all of them so yes he can go into Diagon Alley. Sry I meant to write this chapter so that that was apparent but I guess I didn't. And why he is nice to Harry ties into the plot latter on so I not gonna tell you right now and the second chapter is written but you will have to wait until it is validated to read it. Report Review
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