Excellent chapters 1-5. I love them. Please continue. I look forward to more soon. Report Review
no you have to write more!Author's Response: I'M TRYING!!! I'M TRYING!!! Report Review
great story keep writing!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :]] Report Review
Are there a lot of "hints" in this chapter or is it just me? Does the fact that her fav. animal's a wolf mean anything?Author's Response: Alli!!! You smart person you!!! There are some good "hints", if you will, in there. And as for the wolf, who doesn't love wolves?!?!? I'm gonna tell you a secret. It's also the form of her patronous. But that's not for a while!!! Report Review
Dun dun dun... That was great! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you! Wow, I'm loving your reviews! Then next chapter will be ready . . . soon! I've been really busy juggling school, homework, Stranger than Fiction, and a new story called Beyond the Veil (C.Y.O.S.). It's a Sirius/OC. Oh, yeah, CYOS means Choose Your Own Story! So That's gonna be fun!
Just wait for chapter 6! I'll let you in on a secret! It's called How Would I Get Hurt?, and Jessica tells something to Harry that's gonna drive Harry crazy, and NOT in the good way! ;} Report Review
Aww, poor you for getting grounded. Awsome story though!Author's Response: Thank you! You know, I don't even remember why I got grounded! Oh, well! Thank you so very much for following this story and I'm sooo glad you like it! :]] Report Review
Woa, I'm looking forward to reading that! This story's really good!Author's Response: Thanks! I needed something to "break the ice", and Harry running into a brick wall and passing out seemed like a fun way to do it! ;]] Report Review
Wow! That's really great! Typical Ron to focus on the girl. Keep it up!!!Author's Response: Thank you!!! :]]
Even though my story is a Harry/OC, Ron has always been one of my favorite charcters!!!
Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
Jessica's cool, the chapter IS corny, and Malfoy's perfectly Malfoy.ish.Author's Response: I told you it would be, Alli!!! But I had to introduce Jessica some how! That was the only way that slightly made sense in my mind. As for you thinking Jessica is cool, I repect your oppinion. :]] Report Review
funny girlie u were right but when u gettin un grounded and puttin up the rest its really good and ur a pritty good writer from what ive read lol well love ya girl and ill see ya at school mondayAuthor's Response: kkk luv ya julz Report Review
K... it was really good, except I'm not really into the Tonks bashing. I just don't see free-spirited Tonks being so pushy.Author's Response: Alli!!! You should know that I totally love Tonks!!! Don't worry, that's really the only Tonks bashing, at least for a while! Report Review
Well, I would be mad if she called ME Voldie-poo. That's just cruel. and slightly disturbing! Great, though!!!Author's Response: Ha Alli! I had a feeling you'd say something like that!!! But you don't know the story behind it though!!! So just keep reading!!! Chapter 3 will be hopefully validated on Saturday!!! Luv ya! :]] Report Review
That was awesome! Can't wait to see where it's going... Harry/OC isn't usually my pairing, but this is really good! And you portrayed Ron and Harry perfectly, I was laughing aloud at how much it actually sounded like them!Author's Response: Thanks!!! :]] Don't worry, the next chapter will be longer. I'm just about done with it! It just gets better and better, I think!!! Report Review
Intersting and intruiging. Funny how Ron's only thinking about the girl.
Update soon!! Seems fairly intersting so far.Author's Response: Thank you! I had to think, "What would Ron say right now?" The next chapter will, by far be longer! and better! Report Review
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