i'll be honest, ive pondered if i should read this for a while. and yes i am very glad that i did.
i cant wait to find out what erm, adventures(?) these two get up to. it should be interesting.
looing foward to more! keep it up! 10/10 two thumbs up!

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When I saw this story I thought it was going to be rather stupid, but I thought its only a two shot why not read it. To my suprise i found it touching and brilliant. Please do write more to this story

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This is funny and sad at the same time...I love it. It sorta reminds me of Ratituie, Ratituy...oh w/e that movie with the rat that wanted to cook and he followed that cheif around, lol anyway I love it repost more soon and i'll go try to see if I can talk to bugs. ;)

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this is a really great story, i love it. The Twins are my fave chars, i was devastated when Fred died and always wondered how George coped. keep it up!

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I'm crying and laughing at the same time. Brilliant. I can't even say how sweet I thought this was.

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This is touching, and funny at the same time.
Good job.

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Well I wasn't going to review, but since you're offering crappy muffins I just had to ;) I absolutely love this story. It's such an original idea, and you wrote it brilliantly. I really really like how he interacts with the bug. The first lines about not being able to squash it really hit home and made me feel his loss and abandonment. Great job, one of my favs.

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