Wow that was amazing but really sad. Such a good writer favouriting now Report Review
Great story... I'm a huge Dramione fan, so I couldn't resisit when I saw this one. I loved the line "But there is a difference between being the school bully and being a criminal. " But the ending... *sniffle* A little ironic though don't you think. If I understand the ending correctly, he was aiming to kill his pursuer and hit Hermione instead. He would have lost her either way because if he had hit is intended target he would have lost Hermione anyway because she could never love a murderer, and he knew that.
I really enjoyed this story and can't think of anything even remotly critical to say.
~Moon~ Report Review
Hmm, sad end, but beautifully written. Can't say I exactly enjoyed it, but it was very well written. Now I need to go read somthing happy to make up for that. 10/10
~*Jenni*~Author's Response: Fair enough, thanks. Report Review
*sob* this is so sad, it's the sort of story that makes you cry just reading it. congratulations on perfecting perfection.
LisaAuthor's Response: Oh no, I don't want to make you sad!
Thanks though for liking it however hehe.
Tragic, I especially like the part when Draco weeps not for himself but for hermione-good job Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
awww that was so sad. he was given his life back and then bam his whole world collapses again. amazing story! Report Review
I like the Draco p.o.v
it's sad Hermione dies though...Author's Response: Thanks, but yeah, sorry about the whole Hermoine dying thing...it was my first fic you see and so I apologize =/ Report Review
omg that was an awesome awesome Dramione! and so sad!!! :[
you've done an excellent job with the sentences, theyre not rushed, but theyre chosen carefully.
overall, this deserves a million / ten. great job!Author's Response: First of all, thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it and approve of my writing style =) I'm always happy to hear words of encouragement about that sort of thing. Thanks again! Report Review
Thats so sweet
So much emotion
Even im about to cry
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although i rather liked the simplicity of it,
you could have added a bit more to the ending other than
oops i killed her
Author's Response: True, but I have a weakness for surprise endings. But I agree, it is a bit sudden and could have been more detailed. I'll remember that for next time! Thanks! Report Review
christ that was so good! it made my eyes well up!! omg he kills her i was so dshocked!! wow. dats all i can say. wow. Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it =) Report Review
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