short chapters
interesting so far..update soon

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hey everyone
5th chappie coming real soon.

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I'm really glad you updated, I was wondering what was going on. Poor Sev. All the worst things happen to him. I hope it gets better and that he and Lily stay friends and maybe go out too. Would be a neat plot twist on th original. Great job though!

Author's Response: yeah there still first years so they'll stay "friends" for awhile *wink,wink*

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Wasn't this chapter 4?

Author's Response: huh?

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I like the way you let them have a an owl to share between them and how she's loyal to Snape.

Author's Response: There's more where that came from.(ha ha do i sound like Napoleon Dynamite) ill update soon. PROMISE


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That's cool, he cut his hair for her! You know my brother-in-law did that for my sister just before he got engaged to her, to show her he was really serious about her and to impress my dad--and it worked! Hopefully so will this! Up date soon.

Author's Response: I HOPE SO TOO AND I LL UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. ^_^

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I think this is a really great story so far, and I will read more. Unfortunately, I can't help you with a banner, since I need one too and don't know how to make one.

Author's Response: manditaaknfv, i just registered for an account for Dark Arts, so i will get back to u about the banner soon!!

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I think it moved along too fast :o)

Author's Response: Sorry guys its my first fan fic and im not so good r/r luv ya

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updates yay

Author's Response: 4th chapter in validation ppl

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oh coool

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UMM ok no updates atleast i dont think so

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