{reviewid: 2162252, reviewer: 'dracosgirl18'}
13th July 2009:
I like the storyline, you just need to make the chapters longer, If you like I can help you out. I've been looking to beta a story and if you like I'll beta yours.
I'll add this one to my favorites and if you would like some help writing, my email is mistressmalfoy18(at)yahoo(dot)com
10/10
=) Laura
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{reviewid: 1880678, reviewer: 'Kat%20Malfoy'}
29th March 2008:
THAT WAS AWESOME! I'm going to die if you don't write more. I don't want hear any excuses just plz write more. P.S. If you couldn't tell I really liked the story.
Author's Response: babe I have had NO time!! (allowed any way) T_T
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{reviewid: 1842974, reviewer: 'dans_girl101'}
24th February 2008:
in my own and ginnys words
"daum"
lol
great story!
Author's Response: THANKS
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{reviewid: 1713347, reviewer: 'MysticMagic97'}
16th November 2007:
i read ur best friends story and im going to say the same thing.
ah! why.why.why.? I hate clifhangers anyways 10/10
Author's Response: because they cause suspence and I don't want you to get bored w/ the story now do I?
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{reviewid: 1648873, reviewer: 'Mrs%20George%20Weasley'}
29th September 2007:
wow okay um hunny you need to work on how you annouce things! before she started throwing words out of her mouth make sure it makes sense dont just throw it in there okay!
Mrs. Weasley
Author's Response: i know it kinda made no sence but hay i hav my way u hav urs
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{reviewid: 1636860, reviewer: 'hermioneanddraco'}
19th September 2007:
my warning didn't fit the plot sorry!
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{reviewid: 1635275, reviewer: 'brooklynsam3_'}
18th September 2007:
Wow! This is pretty good! I like it! Can't wait fo rthe next chapter! Keep up the good work and update ASAP. Thankz.
PS 10/10
Author's Response: thanks!
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{reviewid: 1592764, reviewer: 'Fanfair'}
23rd August 2007:
Intersting please do continue
Author's Response: Warning: next chap. may hit home a lil hard for ppl who go through this evryday like moi
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{reviewid: 1591425, reviewer: 'asian'}
22nd August 2007:
It's really short, but it sounds interesting. Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Warning: next chap. may hit home a lil hard for ppl who go through this evryday like moi
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{reviewid: 1590933, reviewer: 'madison_rankin'}
| Review #10, by madison_rankin | Case #7 |
22nd August 2007:
this is good so far just hurry up and update soon
Author's Response: Warning: next chap. may hit home a lil hard for ppl who go through this evryday like moi
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{reviewid: 1590336, reviewer: 'mlui'}
22nd August 2007:
Let me guess, it's Malfoy watching? Hmmm, I'm confused - if they're witches and wizards, wouldn't they still use wands? (Instead of pistols?) Anyways, this is a great start and I hope you update soon! =) 9/10
Author's Response: lol youll hav to see Warning: next chap. may hit home a lil hard for ppl who go through this evryday like moi
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{reviewid: 1590311, reviewer: 'lovexlove'}
22nd August 2007:
i hate cliffies, but i love this story so far so keep writing and update soon!
ps i love fob! inifinity on high rules!
Author's Response: LOL THATS THE POINT evryone hates cliffies but they r still apart of life thats y i use em' Warning: next chap. may hit home a lil hard for ppl who go through this evryday like moi
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