Holy...
If I we're her, I'd probably go dance on Voldie grave.
Probably.
10/10

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Oh my! What an ending! I have to say that was extremely well written! The only thing I can say against it is that Voldemort had hints of being evil when he was young, although you did express some of his imperfections, you did not bring in his stealing, hurting for pleasure side, but, I cannot hold this against you as you effectively wrote an emotional and "deep" Tom Riddle/You story, and that's what the challenge was about...and also, the rules stated that it had to start from the moment Tom met Dumbledore etc, and that did not happen, but, once again, I have to say, this story was too good not to include it in the challenge! Well done! I loved it! 8/10! (purely for the points mentioned above!)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for including me in the challenge despite my not following all the rules. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. I didn't stress Tom's stealing, hurting for pleasure, evil side because the speaker does not want to even acknowledge that side of him. Even after she realized that he wasn't perfect, she still has a habit of idealizing him and not seeing all his flaws. I'm aware that Tom is evil, but she still hasn't really accepted that fact yet. Anyway, thanks again for allowing me to be a part of your wonderful challenge and thank you for the review!!!

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This was very well-written, and I enjoyed reading it :) I'm about to go see if you have other stories now


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Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I hope you like my other things also :)

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wow, i can t imagine how hard that was to right. I really enjoyed it... it was diffrent and an area which few dare to explore, nicely done! 10/10

Author's Response: Suprisingly, it wasn't that hard to write. I was minding my own business one day, when this strange woman in my head just began talking and telling me her story. I simply had to write it down. I swear, I have no control over what I write. I'm glad you like it; I always love venturing into areas few people have explored :)

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