Reading Reviews for Message in a Bottle
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Review #1, by Cyan Green Zephyr Message in a Bottle

18th October 2007:
Hey, I really liked the story a lot. It was an interesting take upon a James Lily in hiding moment. Well done as well, although I'd be careful in my utilization of non-traditional perspective/person in writing. I found it a bit distracting trying to process all the yous and shes, as well as the she would be and she is/was. Still, really nice, and a good one line ending, solid. Keep up the good work, you are a talented writer. ~Ran

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Review #2, by xX mOoNdAnCe Xx Message in a Bottle

13th October 2007:
Wow, that was amazing! It was so incredibly deep and heartfelt, and I can't believe that only two people (excluding myself) have bothered to review this extraordinary piece of writing.
I thought that the way you didn't mention anyone's name made it all the more powerful, and for that and so much else, I applaud you.

Love xX mOoNdAnCe Xx

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Review #3, by You know who Message in a Bottle

13th August 2007:
Beautiful!! I absolutely loved it! It was elegantly written with such breathtaking emotion. A truly beautiful story! I cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: You know I know you so therefore you know who has been discovered. *wipes brow* Now that, that's taken care of. LOL! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. You have no idea how much it means to me that you read it and really enjoyed it. *hugs* As always...

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Review #4, by Hp Fanatic Message in a Bottle

12th August 2007:
Wow...this was incredibly deep..i liked it alot...Congratulations! 10/10!!

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. A lot of emotion was poured into it. I was having a really bad day so hopefully that part wasn't poured into it. LOL! Thanks for the review.

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