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Review #1, by bookboy238 A Lake Disaster

19th March 2008:
Pretty good so far, a small edit ,on the last paragraph "Whit the mention of Scorpius" It should be "With the mention of Scorpius"

Author's Response: Thanks i'll change that. If you do find any mistakes pllease tell me, i have terrible spelling so if it wasn't for spell check you probably wouldn't be able to read anything. lol

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Review #2, by ladybobcat54 The Cousins

16th January 2008:
At this point I really like where the stories going! Is it just me, or is there a bit of a Bridge to Teribithia meets Harry Potter thing going on here? It kind of seems like it, and if it is great job combineing them at this point. If not, great job anyway!
UPDATE SOON! 100/10

Author's Response: New chapter is now up... sorry for the wait.

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Review #3, by onestop_hpfan18 The Cousins

16th January 2008:
Good chapter. There's some spelling mistakes here and there, but overall it's well written.

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Review #4, by onestop_hpfan18 Always Alone

16th January 2008:
This seems like a crossover between Bridge to Terabithia and Harry Potter. I like it. Keep it up.

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Review #5, by dracoisbuff Always Alone

2nd September 2007:
wow jasmine isnt very nice lol very gd chapter can't want for more

Author's Response: next chapter is on the way.

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