{reviewid: 2554128, reviewer: 'lilyjames_maraudersirius'}
25th July 2011:
So much cuteness!
Love,
lilyjames.
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{reviewid: 2551700, reviewer: 'ginnypotter242'}
22nd July 2011:
It was really good, a cute way of getting them together. To add to it, you could put Lily's thoughts when she kissed him, or why she dicided to say yes. It seemed a little rushed, and OOC for her just to say yes right away, that's all. But in all, it was a very good story.
Author's Response: This was the one of the first fan fics I ever wrote. I was like 13! Haha. I just always chose to leave it as is. :) Thank you for the lovely review though. :)
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{reviewid: 2327906, reviewer: 'evans_4eva'}
7th April 2010:
love it love it love it!! haha
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{reviewid: 2232148, reviewer: 'la%20belle%20lune%20'}
6th October 2009:
awww! that was a cute 5 minute read :) well autcully like 3 min but cute all the same
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{reviewid: 2215129, reviewer: 'Mia'}
12th September 2009:
lol
i reckon you shudve ended it by her going no and smirking
and then walking away leaving them shocked.
but its good
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{reviewid: 2195264, reviewer: 'Unknown'}
16th August 2009:
So cute! I just read your forum, are you going to post Some Kind of Magic? That would be so fantastic!!
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{reviewid: 2195085, reviewer: 'monkiie_business%20'}
16th August 2009:
it was okaii
but i think that james got lily a bit too easily
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{reviewid: 2194047, reviewer: 'sreduaram'}
15th August 2009:
adorable and very very cute! i love that they have to coerce her into kissing him, but she does end up giving him a chance :)
Author's Response: Aw! Thanks alot! I'm glad that you liked it! =D
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{reviewid: 2193231, reviewer: 'pandaluvr'}
14th August 2009:
this is so cute. i love it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review!
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{reviewid: 2193127, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
14th August 2009:
great fic u have here.^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
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{reviewid: 2192214, reviewer: 'evanlyn'}
13th August 2009:
I saw this in the banner requests at tda and couldn't resist :) It is very well written, I love you characterisation of Remus and Sirius, only a few lines of dialogue and still they come through so strongly!
Well done, a fantastic one-shot!
Author's Response: Aw...thanks! That just made my already great day better! =D
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{reviewid: 2190918, reviewer: 'confusedlover'}
11th August 2009:
very lovely.
super short and a little quick but cute and sweet all the same. great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
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{reviewid: 2187857, reviewer: 'Isabel%20Black'}
9th August 2009:
Cute, little, bunny! I mean, story! Why don't you conside writting more?
OK, finish politeness! Now you HAVE to write more!!! Or else . . . .
Ahem. Sorry! But really, you just SHOULD continue. Or else I'll hunt you down and . . . god knows what's next!
Am I being too rude? Well, then it's YOUR fault. Who asked you to write SUCH a good story? ha? But now, EYE ask you to continue it, so you'd better!!!
Author's Response: Haha. A little creepy...but thanks! =D
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{reviewid: 1969233, reviewer: 'neville5'}
21st October 2008:
omg i loved it i loved when you wrote that she read the same page 11 times! your such a good writer! you should make a story about me :) i love you so much (as a friend lol) well ttly neville5
Author's Response: Hehe! Hey, Jamie! I'm glad that you liked it! Yeah, IDK, abut the 11 times thing. I needed something to show that she was distracred by them being in the room and that's what I came up with! And, thank you! I'm glad you think I'm good writer! And a story about you, or a story about Neville? And I love you as a frined, too!
TTYL,
hermione_jane45
P.S. Life Sucks, And Then You Die. LOL!
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{reviewid: 1724079, reviewer: 'BatSEnecal'}
24th November 2007:
That was cute. It was a nice idea to how they ended up together. But there were a couple of typos. But they didn't desturb the flow or anything. 9/10
Author's Response: Thanks. It's my most popular and I have no idea why! Anyway, thanks fr the Reveiew.
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{reviewid: 1688966, reviewer: 'N%2FA'}
28th October 2007:
uhh
ok... it was cute
but it kinda needs more to it
Author's Response: Thnx. Everyone tells me it needs more to it. But... I don't know what I can bring to it!
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{reviewid: 1608129, reviewer: 'Luna65'}
1st September 2007:
Yeah it was really good
Author's Response: Thanx
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{reviewid: 1605426, reviewer: 'ems'}
30th August 2007:
DUMBEST THING EVER
Author's Response: If you don't like it there is no need to revwiew and even if you do you don't have to be so rude. It may have been dumb to you but I have 6 other reveiwers that say otherwise.
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{reviewid: 1605192, reviewer: 'malice94'}
30th August 2007:
Love it lol! Remus was so OOC it was funny! VERY good!
Author's Response: Thnx! Some people are so rude! Thnx for the nice reveiew. Remus was funy wasn't he?
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{reviewid: 1604395, reviewer: 'Zokara'}
30th August 2007:
I really like this story.
Author's Response: Thnx!
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{reviewid: 1603979, reviewer: 'Aneres'}
29th August 2007:
It was kinda fast and unrealistic, but still cute.
Author's Response: Yes, kind of unrealistic and it was a VERY short one-shot. But I had fun writing it!
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{reviewid: 1603932, reviewer: 'OmiXitsXJaime'}
29th August 2007:
I liked it, it was cute, funny, and right to the point. You should soo make a novel about it!
10
~jAiMe
Author's Response: hahhaa IDk How I would but I'll try!
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{reviewid: 1603671, reviewer: 'prettywheezy'}
29th August 2007:
just a bit corney but still cute:)
Author's Response: Yeah I guess so but I had the idea!
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