This is pretty good! I always hated Draco, I KNEW he couldn't be trusted! (Just so you know, I hate Draco Malfoy) Really good - 10/10! (Oh, and I am also a HUMONGOUS Teddy Lupin fan!
I don't know how to make a banner, but I would make a banner for you if I could. Report Review
hmmm what is going on. I thought draco was sort of on friendly terms with the friends of Harry potter now, after harry saved his life.I wonder. Hm post more soon.
p.s sorry i'm useless when it comes to making baners. :(Author's Response: I'll be finishing the next chapter up on Sunday. Chapter 4 will explain why Draco is a bad guy. Report Review
So as it is, I'm the worlds biggest Harry/Hermione shipper, so when i saw that you had done this i was like hell yeahs, but I am falling in love with the whole Teddy/Victoire ship because its cute, so yeah, I like this, its a nice beginning. Report Review
i think this is a cute beginning! i hope you continue writing. Report Review
Nice begining.. i love harry and hermione together! Report Review
Hm great start, Looking forward to more. Post soon please. Report Review
Teddy is very violent.
I fear him. Report Review
i've never cared for harry/hermione before, but you wrote it well. it seems to be basically about victoire and teddy, so it doesn't really affect the story. Report Review
i dont like harmione storyz... ... ... ... Report Review
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