i love it! your reallygood at writing, lol, the story/plot is great, 10/10
love lou aka xxx_firesparks_xxx Author's Response: 10/10!?!?!
yay! thank you so much for reviewing!!!!
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heya! you scratch my back i'll scratch yours!
I thought this was very original and well written. Myrtle was just fabulous :"Some Hufflepuff girls called me fat!" and the last quote had me laughing. Looks like our ghostly pal has moved on from Harry.
Poor misguided Draco- crying doesn't make you weak-in some ways it makes you stronger. I suppose by him thinking he's weak by crying he is (if that makes sense)
Another part i loved was when draco was reflecting about katie and ron. There's a quote somewhere that i adored (one second):
"Draco began to wonder how many people would cram into the hospital wing if he had been poisoned. Not as many as Weasley’s got, he thought bitterly." most probably true.
Anyway, 10/10 :)
Author's Response: hey! thanks for the cookie, i'll give you one too! 10/10 wow that makes me want to jump up and dance! I loved writing myrtle in this story because it was so depressing writing about draco so I had to add some funny stuff in somewhere Thanks for this great review!!! Report Review
This was a really good story- and it's a very good idea, too. Last line- best Myrtle quote EVER. You made my day!Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you like it! I love that line too!! Report Review
I liked the ending alot-reminded me of the comment made towards Harry in his second year...you show emotion very well.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love good reviews like this!!! Report Review
How cute-it's like Draco switched with Harry in Mytle's affection. You're right, though, it is a bit short, lengthening it wouldn't hurt. :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'll probably go back and edit it after I finish my short story. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Don't make this one word longer. It is perfect at this length. The pacing, imagery and characterization are good.
I utterly loathe Draco, so much I'm not even a fan of Tom Felton. :-)
But you captured the feel of a young man caught up in something not only too big for him but something that he did not really agree with.
BravoAuthor's Response: Thankyou so much! That was a really good review! I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks again for reviewing! Report Review
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