{reviewid: 1641081, reviewer: '%7ERona%7E'}
23rd September 2007:
this is going to be a great story! i cant wait to see what happens!
i just love all your ideas!
Author's Response: thanks-i really appreciate the encouragement.
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{reviewid: 1641066, reviewer: 'Allie'}
23rd September 2007:
A fantastic piece of written work. Your use of characterisation really brought the story to life! I am waiting with baited breath for the next instalment.
Author's Response: that could be a while as im not going to post the next chapter until it has been beta read. Thanks
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{reviewid: 1641063, reviewer: 'Beryl'}
23rd September 2007:
more more more please
Brill can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: thanks very much!! next chapter could be a while as im not posting un-edited chapters anymore due to an earlier comment.
you have no idea how much difference your support makes!
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{reviewid: 1641055, reviewer: 'Hedwig'}
23rd September 2007:
Well done Phil! What a great start. Keep writing
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1641017, reviewer: '%2A%2AJoJo%2A%2A'}
23rd September 2007:
Excellent start to this story, can't wait to read the next installment.
A few spelling mistakes, but, nothing that is not easily corrected.
Once again fantastic story.
Author's Response: thanks-the edited version hasnt been validated yet lol
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{reviewid: 1641016, reviewer: '%2A%2AJoJo%2A%2A'}
23rd September 2007:
Excellent start to this story, can't wait to read the next installment.
A few spelling mistakes, but, nothing that is not easily corrected.
Once again fantastic story.
Author's Response: lol-u posted twice but thanks
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{reviewid: 1640991, reviewer: 'Goldilocks'}
23rd September 2007:
really interesting! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
i love the fact that Ginny and Harry didn't work out immediately. when he came into the common room she didn't lynch him!
anyways
keep up the writing i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: thanks! the edited version should hopefully be validated any tim now
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{reviewid: 1620077, reviewer: 'Chad%20McDonald'}
8th September 2007:
I believe this guy must have a few friends bigging up his writing, because I can’t believe any one that has reviewed the work can’t see any faults in what’s has been written. It is a little sad, that he can’t stand on his own two feet and receive some serious criticism.
Author's Response: Fair enough-it's probably because they hadn't read the un-beta'd chapter 1 as it hadn't been validated at the time. If you're interested, that chapter has now been edited and all the incorrect/uncannon parts have been taken out. e.g. effects of expelliarmus, merlins daughter etc
I'm happy to recieve criticism-it really helps me improve my work. It would have been a bit more usefull if you could have pointed out the falts-but then I guess that you're not here to do that-you're here to enjoy yourself, as it should be.
Thanks anyway-I appreciate all reviews
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{reviewid: 1619757, reviewer: 'loopy%20luna'}
8th September 2007:
well done keep posting fantastic
Author's Response: thanks!
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{reviewid: 1619694, reviewer: 'jemima.p'}
8th September 2007:
fantastic keep it up i'm gripped already
Author's Response: thanks! just posted the edited chapter 1
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{reviewid: 1616709, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Hedwig'}
6th September 2007:
What a great opening! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I've posted another chapter but it hasn't been validated yet. It might not be for a while as I havent had it beta-read yet.
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{reviewid: 1582275, reviewer: 'PotterGirl102'}
18th August 2007:
Good start. This could turn into a very interesting and creative story. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thanks very much-my first review ever!
I'm getting it beta-read and have been away for 2 weeks so it's taking me a while to get the next chapter in-I'm thinking of making the current chapter a prolouge as it's quite short.
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