I wish you would update this. I would really like to see how things work out. Report Review
In many ways I can relate to this story, pain and suffering. You have delved into the subject with tenderness and thoughtfulness. Well done. Report Review
Yes, what is the use of plastic fruit?! :D Excellent question.
I think I'm going to like this story =) You tell it very beautifully and your characters don't feel the least bit fake. You managed to write a gorgeous chapter without even the smallest dialogue; the emotions alone made it more than great! Good job!
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i like the two different narrators... and i can't wait to see what happens! somehow, this dosen't sound like the norm of fanfiction. Report Review
wooo hooo first review. wow this chapter was amazing. The emotion in it was really great, and all around fantastic jobAuthor's Response: thanks :) Report Review
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