just as I had imagined it - no cliches or anything. You are gifted!

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No Words...
Exactly... words would not be enough to explain the pleasure of reading you.

Thank you.

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such a good one shot! the kiss yea it was not needed too i agree but definitely heated the ending up! lol wanting more haha awesome! :] hope to read more from ya, another sequel one shot? lol! good job anyway!

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Oh. My. Gosh. Just... wow. I'm utterly speechless. This was beautiful. I love it.

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Wow...for the sake of this story, I'm going to say, I'm at a loss for words. ;)

But disregarding that, I think this story was very unique. Although not the best one-shot I've read out there, it's definitely one of the better ones. I like how there's no dialogue in the story. It changes the atmosphere a bit, shifts it into calmer, yet tenser territory. Describing the time spent staring at each other was effective.

The line where you Hermione felt him staring and knew he was staring because it was equal to her own time spent staring at him...speechless. Your snapshot of this relationship feels so slow-moving (because of the lengthy, descriptive, deep paragraphs), and at the same time, it's so real. Especially the scene where Hermione decided to sit at Draco's desk, since he had been gone for so long...

I think the kiss could have been avoided, it didn't add that much to the story...Nevertheless, it was a nice touch and the ending is perfect. It's so dark, but also promises more for their relationship. :)

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O. M. G!
that was brilliant!
10/10 no wait. 1000/10!
i love how they didnt say anything but it was just like they did!

you are such a clever and fantastic writer this is definitly one of my favs!

tigerseyexxx

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Most Beautiful DM/HG Fanfic Ever!

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This is by far one of the most real, and spine tingling stories I've read. Great, great job. Excellent language, and descriptions.

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I love the way this was written. Your use of language is enchanting.

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You have officially made me a Dramione fan. I never ever thought this would happen.

Wow.

I am still..

There are no words. Your writing is brilliant. You sell the pairing to me so easily, it's unreal. I LOVE it. I found myself not breathing after reading a couple of lines - like when Draco was watching her at his desk from the hidden alcove. Gahh! So intense.

10/10

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My God, this story is perfect. Stunning, shimmering, alive, and painfully love. Amazing.

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Ah, but this was almost sad.
The first thing I noticed, was that there was not a single word spoken. In the whole story.
The second thing I noticed was that there was nothing behind, nothing ahead.
The third thing I noticed was that the whole story had a constant sombreness. It was also sad, when you think of it. The voice was sad. It's something you could read and get shivers from.
The fourth thing I noticed was the author name.
That's the fifth story of yours I've read.
You write amazing DraMione, just telling you.

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:O
This is so incredible and wonderful. Every single word was beautiful. I bow at the foot of the master!

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Beautiful ! I can't even -- I'm speechless. The imagery is fabulous, it's like a poetic kind of writing. The language is stunning, and the ending was outstanding. Two thumbs up !

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wonderful! beautiful!

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Wow. That was breathtaking & truly magical, without using any magic :) I wish I could convey that kind of emotion without any dialogue or names or other characters. I love all your writing, Elysium! Especially the Dramiones :) 20/10 if I could!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this absolutely lovely review :D

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I love this story it's so short but so emotional and amazing and really well written. It's one of those stories that makes you go "wow" at the end.
Have you seen this video on youtube, I think it's brilliant and it fits so well with your story too :) It wouldn't let me post the link but the video is called Only Human, is by Eclairu and is obviously a Draco/Hermione video. I hope you enjoy it :)
Well Done again for an amazing story!

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No words!! Brilliant

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

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Wow.

You truly are one of the great pros on this site.

You've successfully written tension, angst, mystery, sadness, with heartstrings attached and with no dialogue.

His kiss and 4 written words revealed an ocean of meaning.

I loved that his breath is finally what made him "real" to her.

I'm giving you my own award. I'm throwing long-stemmed fragrant romantic red roses! A Standing "O"...

Bravo, Elysium!

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Well written.Takes a bit to imagine this would actually happen,but given that it is intriguing.

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This was written absolutely beautifully. That's all I can say - really, really incredibly well done!

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OMG i love this your so creative!!!

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Beautifully written!

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My fave dramione so far!omg this is so cute.i love it

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That was amazing! It's just so incredibly well written! Luv it!

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