what's with sirius at the end? does he like her? Report Review
I like your story so far, it seems interesting. My only advice is to go over it and proofread. There were some minor grammar and spelling mistakes, but nothing too major. Anyway I hope you update soon :) Author's Response: we will try to do that! spelling isn't easy in our family. we don't know why... we're trying you'll read why it is taking us so long in the next chapter. Report Review
purty good FUN N KISSESAuthor's Response: thank you! Report Review
Aww. I adore Lupin. Please continue! =] xAuthor's Response: Okay I will once I get some more inspiration.... I deleted what I had written before I didn't like it.... the first chapter is good though I think Report Review
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