It's hard to picture Blaise being a girl...since he's a boy in the books lol. That's my only critique. Good start =] Report Review
Wonderful start!!! I love it! Please keep it up!
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I really loved this story. Report Review
Cool idea and please update soon thanks.Author's Response: My newer chapter will be up soon... I've been exceedingly busy and haven't had time to write. Report Review
Very nice. Clever, too. I'm always on the hunt for another good draco/hermione story, and I think I've found my next good read. I especially like the Fawkes portrait. I've never seen that done before.
I like the Draco torture, but the pinning against the wall thing surprised me in its abruptness.
Good job! I'll read on, and keep letting you know what I think.
Also, I'm fresh to the whole fanfic ordeal, and I would greatly appreciate it if you would take a look at my first attempt, Scorching Blue: The First Tale, and let me know what you think!
KurlzAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update soon.
Aah! You have to update now! I absolutely love it!!!Author's Response: Thanks ^_^
I've been trying to finish up chapter 5, but I've got major writer's block, it's so horrible.
-.-' Report Review
love the story hate the way this chapter ended lol i hate cliff hangers plz undate soonAuthor's Response: Lulz. I'm writing/finishing up chapter 5 as we speak!
Writer's block is so horrible V.V Report Review
WOW!He kissed her.''WOW"that all i can say anyway great chapter and update soon!Author's Response: lol! Yes, he kissed her. ^_^ Report Review
wow thats suprising>
niceAuthor's Response: yeah... there's a lot of surprises on the way. lol Report Review
AWW! I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work and update ASAP. Thankz.
PS 10/10Author's Response: -points to brooklynsam3-
I LOVE THIS GIRL! she's one of my most faithful reviewers.
I'm doing my best! Report Review
aww cute story please updateAuthor's Response: Thanks, I'm trying to update as soon as possible ^_^ Report Review
AWSOME...keep it upAuthor's Response: Thanks!! Report Review
oh damn! =) I really like this story! The plot is developing at a perfect rate, not too fast, not too slow, and everything that is going on totaly reminds me of high school =) Very well written, I can't wait to read whats next!Author's Response: Thank you =]
I'm trying to keep it at a steady pace, but it's difficult when I've got so many different ideas popping up sometimes. Report Review
You do no that Zabini is a boy? Did you read the 6th book when they where in slughorns compartment on the train?
Very good non the less
Author's Response: Trust me, I've read them all. I'm entirely aware of Blaise's gender in JK's books.
However, in fanfiction, JK has most generously given us the choice of given Blaise a male or female role. Or at least, someone did.
For more information, scroll down to see the other comment on this topic ^_^ Report Review
WOW!That all i can really say,I mean he likes her and she likes him and I think that sweet.But the way you make him sound is so hot and nice and above all sweet!Good chapter update soon!Author's Response: well, it's not all sugar and everything nice; there's a lot of spice coming, so stay tuned. Report Review
its really good and i am looking forward to more excitement!Author's Response: gah... I am currently facing a very large writer's block. sooo I'm not quite sure when my next chapter will be up. also, college classes, paired with work, make it difficult to write. =[[[
I'll work on it, though! Report Review
I'm a little skeptical but I know you are going to prove me wrong and do a fabulously. Keep up the good work and update ASAP. THankz.
PS 10/10Author's Response: ^_^ I'll work my hardest!
thanks for the rate! Report Review
Great chappie and it wasd surprising to see another side of Draco. Very Nice!
Update soonAuthor's Response: thanks, working on the next chapter Report Review
"A connection had been made, and she didn’t want to break it…" GOODIE!!!
"but she did want to test it." Uh oh... dun dun dun
I didn't find it tedious at all, so keep on writing! And, please update soon. Thanks!Author's Response: lol! well, it does get a lot more interesting; all I'm saying is, don't get too comfortable with your popcorn ^_^ Report Review
Nice chapter, but draco really got ooc very soon...oh well lol
Keep the chapters comin'!
Author's Response: ooc?
[sorry, first fic... and fairly new to the site as well. somebody translate?] Report Review
well good! love the whole draco/hermione concept. You should maybe make things more deatailed but overall it was really great! Can't wait for the next chapters! Good luck xAuthor's Response: thank you very much; I'm trying to think of how they would act/talk. Report Review
I like this so far and they have only gotten through their first week! Keep more coming!!Author's Response: unfortunately, submissions have been blocked for non-trusted authors... and seeing as this is my first fic, I am quite helpless.
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You know if I read one more story in which Malfoy pins Hermione against a wall I'll scream! Talk about overused cliches!Author's Response: I personally haven't read any... meh. anyways, sorry that you feel that way. Report Review
Good grief! They're so. gr, they just need to get together and be happy, lol
Rebecka M.Author's Response: trust me, it's coming ^_^ Report Review
Loved how long your chapter was and it was wonderful too! Just one small detail. I'm not sure if you put this into consideration, but, in the books Blaise Zabini is a boy. Just to let you know.Author's Response: yes, I know... I have read almost all of them, and am aware. But in fanfiction, JK has been generous enough to allow us the choice of giving Blaise a male or female role. or at least, someone did... well, whatever, kudos to them.
I chose a female Blaise, I thought it would be more interesting. true, it robs Draco of his "best mate"... but Crabbe and Goyle play their part.
however, props to you for the insight! Report Review
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