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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Sarah The Trip to Hogwarts

8th December 2007:
good, but i've read better. thought that scopius was going to be in this. Oh well, off to the next story.

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Review #2, by anon The Trip to Hogwarts

27th September 2007:
boats, not boots.

Writers an idiot.

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Review #3, by luciousisafag The Trip to Hogwarts

18th August 2007:
your on to something here, it is a very good start...

almost fits perfectly with the book



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Review #4, by Harry and Ginny_4evr The Trip to Hogwarts

15th August 2007:
It was good. Here's a little constructive criticism for you, work on your spelling of the words. It's a little choppy but I'll keep my eye out for more of it. Oh, can the chapters be a little longer? I like this story.


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Review #5, by luciegoosi The Trip to Hogwarts

15th August 2007:
good interesting start to the story, a few spelling mistakes so you might want to have a reedit of that, coz they can be a bit distracting. but other than that! its good! keep going!

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Review #6, by Joanne K The Trip to Hogwarts

15th August 2007:
This isn't a bad story so far, but there are quite a few spelling mistakes.
Aile should be Aisle, boot should be boat, herd should be heard, Griffendor should be Gryffindor and Pavaty should be Parvati.

Keep writing, and make sure you keep an eye on your spelling :)

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