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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by CH

26th October 2011:

Very nice, although I do wish that you could have expanded the story more. It really has great potential :)

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Review #2, by CH

Back to Godric's Hollow

26th October 2011:

Great job on this one :)

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Review #3, by Deno

Return to Hogwarts

12th August 2011:

Really? Adult Severus can't protect himself from bunch of fifth year Hogwarts students? A man propably strongest wizard in books after Tom Riddle/Dumbledore/Grindelwald?

This part of story has a bit not unrealistic if not at all. I understand you are trying to make Severus' stroy dramatistic as possible but at least put some realism into your story.

Thanks for your efforts and have a nice week

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Review #4, by Crissie

Dementors in Little Whinging

13th February 2010:

Hello! I really like the first chapter of your book! I only have one small complaint, it is a rather long chapter.

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Review #5, by strangegirl6125

Dementors in Little Whinging

14th January 2008:

There you go! Dudley's the smart one. When a muggle facing a wizard, simply give him a right hook and away you go. XD

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Review #6, by ahh

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10th September 2007:

stupid bird!

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Review #7, by AngelLight

Dementors in Little Whinging

5th September 2007:

I'm liking this story & I'm interested to see what happens next. It's well written. I also like the fact that you picked up that Harry would feel guilty if the Dursleys were killed. I've read some stuff where he doesn't care & that's not Harry at all I feel!

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