Very nice, although I do wish that you could have expanded the story more. It really has great potential :) Report Review
Great job on this one :) Report Review
Really? Adult Severus can't protect himself from bunch of fifth year Hogwarts students? A man propably strongest wizard in books after Tom Riddle/Dumbledore/Grindelwald?
This part of story has a bit not unrealistic if not at all. I understand you are trying to make Severus' stroy dramatistic as possible but at least put some realism into your story.
Thanks for your efforts and have a nice week Report Review
Hello! I really like the first chapter of your book! I only have one small complaint, it is a rather long chapter. Report Review
There you go! Dudley's the smart one. When a muggle facing a wizard, simply give him a right hook and away you go. XD Report Review
stupid bird! Report Review
I'm liking this story & I'm interested to see what happens next. It's well written. I also like the fact that you picked up that Harry would feel guilty if the Dursleys were killed. I've read some stuff where he doesn't care & that's not Harry at all I feel! Report Review
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