Um, you've got quite a few grammar issues, but a very good beginning. R and r my fic, plz.

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good work ,me!

Author's Response: Thanks me!

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Deciding for a divorce was very, very short. It should have been longer. The scene where Ginny died was a little short to.

Author's Response: soory.I'm not the best i try but i didn't want to make a huge fuss about the divorce.I want it to just happen.But,becouse i am nice,there will be more detail in the next chapter.

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It's sort of short. But good so far and pretty sadening.

Author's Response: k i understand.

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This chapter is so sad! *sob* Why must luna die??? awesome story so far.plz write more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks anna.You rock!Luna MAY make a return (dum dum dum dumm)

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Amazing! when will u write more??? plz make it nice and long!

Author's Response: Yes,Okay.

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Hey! I'm really liking this so far, it has a good plot, i cant wait for more, your good at writing!! hehee, lol

love lou aka xxx_firesparks_xxx

Author's Response: Thanks!There will be more and once i finish,there may be a sequal.

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8/10 kinda short though. Good story Excellent plot. Luna kept up with the crazy creatures till she died. :( Is there going to be more?

Author's Response: yes there will be more.Luna has not left forever..........also,thank you.I have thenecklace i was referring too.thanks again!

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