I love this founder's story. KML, you have amazing talent.Author's Response: Thanks, dear! I'm glad you like it! Report Review
This is a good story keep the chapters coming.Author's Response: Thanks! I decided to get back to my writing this summer, so maybe I'll start the work on it :) Report Review
well that was sweet. but i am sure happiness will disapper soon especially for helga.Author's Response: Yes. When salazar leaves. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Hmm. I'm very pleased with the progress of this story. It is going into my favs and I can't wait to see what else you are going to do with it. 10/10Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it so much! Report Review
I don't think Helga's in that Sprout stereotype, not at all.
10/10Author's Response: Good, I hoped she wasn't. Thanks! Report Review
I loved Rowena's voice is, it's so real, I felt like !I was thereAuthor's Response: Thanks! Report Review
i love it!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Eeee!! I love this! I don't know if I've read a Founders story in first-person point of view before, but I'm really enjoying it so far! Especially with Rowena telling it. I also love the fact that Godric is the Astronomy teacher... Godric certainly does have hidden depth, doesn't he? Anyway, fantastic beginning! I'm looking forward to more! :)Author's Response: Thanks! I should have time for chapter 2 in a few days! Report Review
That was well written. I liked how you described the school. You seem to be good at describing. I liked this chapter. Keep writing!
Wishing you many good writings,
FleurAuthor's Response: Thanks! Once I work my crazy band schedule out, I'm getting on Chapter 2! Report Review
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