I can so picture this happening. It's as if I've known ya'll for years. You should continue with this story. Obviously there has been no twin readheaded people yet. the story is incomplete without redheaded twins.

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HA HA! The part about the rular kinda reminded me about this one time when I was hanging out with my friends. Really funny story, actually. Keep writing!

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lol! I LOVED Kylie's reaction to the 'strange man!' I was laughing out loud! lol! There were a couple grammar mistakes but not too many. Very attention grabbing!!! :) And I also enjoyed the descriptions that you did for the girls' favorite spot; very detailed!!! I'm adding this to my favs, and I WANT TO READ MORE! :P

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. When I first started typing this, I was so excited, i guess i messed up a bit. I know i have to fix the part about 'Roy' being a swine and all. the rest of that sentence got cut off and is at the end of the chapter for some reason... hmm.

The spot that they go to is real. my friend who wrote this has a very detailed imagination.
I'll write more as soon as I can. I've got AP classes this year and I've got SO much work. I hate school. :)

I'll try and post some tonight!

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HAHAHA A RULER! LMFAO!! she sound like me!! except i have no step family. hahaha i can't wait to read the rest.

Author's Response: Well, my friend found out that I posted it and I must thank you for such a positive response because if you hadn't said that she probably would have killed me!

She's really self-conscious about her work. I'm the only person she allows to read her stories so the consequences could have been severe!

I'm glad you liked it!

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