Please,why don't you carry on? I would like how it end this story. If you are updating somewhere else, please tell me !

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It's a really good story. Major spelling mistakes though in both chapters.

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i love this plot if only u could update more plz i really love this story

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Why would she regret it... I like Puddlemere better anyways.

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this story has a little bit of spelling problems, but not many, good news is the story plot sounds great!

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Dang, Im usually not hooked after the first chapter, but I am to yours. The ones that I get hooked on usually are really long first chapters but yours rocked. I cant wait to see or rather read what happens!

Author's Response: Thanks! You'll see(/read) more soon. I'm just finishing up the second chappie. But it's kinda hard since I have a pile of every growing homework, school and a job. But it should be up sometime soon.

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this would be really great if it slowed down and you used a beta. . . .there are a few minor grammatical mistakes where you used a word incorrectly and simple spelling mistakes. If you want someone to be a beta for you, I will offer up my services. . . .anything for a good Oliver story!

Author's Response: I'm trying my best, English isn't my first language, but I think I'm doing okay. I'll talk to you later about offer. I'll probably want it. I have a lot going on and writing is my stress reliever. Thanks!

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It's good, but it goes a bit too fast. The paragraphs are too short, and it's needs to be a bit more descriptive.

Author's Response: Kay! I'll try to work on fixing that!

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