{reviewid: 2659785, reviewer: 'Fawkes_the_Pheonix'}
15th February 2012:
Love the idea off this story. Thanks!
-Fawkes
PS- read my fictions
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{reviewid: 2535308, reviewer: 'McKayla'}
19th June 2011:
I think it's really cute but a little repetitive. It also could be made to have more significance at the end. You should edit it! it has lots of potential for awesome. If you want to edit it feel free to message me because I'm pretty good at editing, and I'd love to help.
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{reviewid: 2534985, reviewer: 'Fe%20Forgotten'}
19th June 2011:
this is a gorgeous little story. made me smile and laugh. also made me fall in love with Lily and James just a little bit more. Its adorable to see Lily as the start of James' signature prankster life.
keep writing. you're amazingly talented. good luck for future writing and life. you write as if you are a beautiful person.
xx
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{reviewid: 2495065, reviewer: 'Owlpost68'}
17th March 2011:
HAHAHAHAA that's a great idea! Now it's all thanks to her the Marauders exist really! lolol I bet she turned into a bookworm and things because of Petunia, trying to be at least a little normal for her sister. That was such a great idea!!
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{reviewid: 2377131, reviewer: 'hplover_15'}
12th July 2010:
It was good, I always thought of James as the prankster since he was young but I never thought about what Lily might be like when she was younger, like if she was less shy at home of anything.
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{reviewid: 2198679, reviewer: 'letters'}
19th August 2009:
I think it's pretty hilarious and ironic that Lily started James' career on pranking people that mostly included her and Sev. Keep writing.
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{reviewid: 1784729, reviewer: 'Jess'}
9th January 2008:
Of course I will tell you how I feel...by leaving a review...
This was GREAT! You should add more to it and change it to a short story instead of a one-shot.
Author's Response: thanks. i'm going to make a story that kinda goes from this one. but i'm really busy right now and i don't have the time.
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{reviewid: 1755027, reviewer: 'Lolo_Lex_gryffindorgals'}
16th December 2007:
It was ok not the best but it was ok.
xoxo~Lex
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1743065, reviewer: 'hogwarts_chica19'}
6th December 2007:
aww its cute! you should make a story where they remember this day or something...idk... good job tho
Author's Response: i'm going to. i'm working on it right now. glad you like.
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{reviewid: 1742612, reviewer: 'blondeWeasly'}
6th December 2007:
OMG! LOVED IT!!! lol Im assuming the boy is James and she got him started with Pranks. So AWESOME! loved ur prosective on things. Nice writing too
Author's Response: thanks. yeah the boy is james.
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{reviewid: 1688395, reviewer: 'Lily_JamesFan'}
28th October 2007:
This is really good :D !
I like Lily, she's funny.
Author's Response: thanks.
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{reviewid: 1675067, reviewer: 'annandnattie'}
18th October 2007:
what time period is this in? maby i missed it...but GOOD!! amazing!! i love it , the detail, AMAZING!!
-Nattie
Author's Response: i really don't know exactly when this story takes place. all i know is it takes place when lily and james are kids. i worked really hard on the detail. i'm glad you like it.
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{reviewid: 1665253, reviewer: 'xX%20mOoNdAnCe%20Xx'}
12th October 2007:
Haha, what a way to turn James into a prankster! I loved the idea, well done!
xX mOoNdAnCe Xx
Author's Response: thanks.
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{reviewid: 1651101, reviewer: 'maurader%20fan'}
1st October 2007:
This is really good. Its an interesting take on Lily, and it really suits the one-shot format you have given it.
Author's Response: thanks. i really like the idea that james got his pranking ideas fron lily so i wrote about it.
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{reviewid: 1648430, reviewer: 'lisapotter'}
29th September 2007:
i think its cute! good job. you should write more about lily/james. i love those kind of stories!!
Author's Response: i'm writing more lily/james. i love to write about them. thanks for the review.
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{reviewid: 1645812, reviewer: 'FaerieGirl'}
27th September 2007:
Cool. Great idea. Very original. Shame it's just a one-shot, i would have liked to hear more.
Author's Response: i'm writing a story that is based of of this story. it's called swings. i'm having writers block on that story too so it might not be out for awhile. i would like to get it up before my birthday which is in february. so i'll work on that if i have time. i'm working on 2 other storys too. one is called the weird and wonderful meghan. my best friend is helping me write it since it is about her. my other story is called black roses. that will probaly be the first one out.i have not had writers block at all yet. and i've got the whole story planned.
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{reviewid: 1590747, reviewer: '77minerva77'}
22nd August 2007:
That was an adorable story with a great idea for a plot, but there were a couple grammtical errors. If you iron those out, I think it'll be quite good-I love the idea of James getting prank ideas from Lily!
Author's Response: thanks. i'm not that good at grammer. so sorry that theres some errors.
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