You deffenitley hafe to finish this story because it was pretty damn good so far.

 Report Review

nice story looking forward to the next one...

 Report Review

good story

Author's Response: Thank you for the review and please feel free to take the time to tell me what you truly think about my story. I have an open ear to suggestions and complaints, so please let me know if you have anything you think could better my work.

 Report Review

I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review and making my work seem validated. My next chapters should be up in a week.

 Report Review

very good you must continue it

Author's Response: I plan on continuing this story in to at least 30 chapters and most likely turn it into a trilogy. Thank you for your reply and please be patient in the next couple of weeks until I get the time to finish my next couple of chapters. I plan on posting the next five chapters in about a week and continuing that process every other week if I can scrounge up a beta to help me out. Thank you for your review, I appreciate those who take the time to tell me what they think.

 Report Review

i love it and its only 1st chaptr :) 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you for the reply, this is my first time writing in nearly ten years and I'm glad that somebody enjoys what I am working for. My new chapters will be a bit sparse in the next couple weeks because of a busy work schedule BUT THEY WILL COME EVENTUALLY.

 Report Review