I loved this story. Very nice.

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This was a good story :) I liked how the map had AW and MP on it- that was really cute and a great twist. I also really liked how Hermione kept trying to interrupt Ron when he kept on rambling. Two notes: In the beginning of the story, you changed tenses a few times. I'm probably just being knit picky, it's not a big deal :) Second... well, at the end, when Ron kisses Hermione, it says that he leans over and lays a tedious kiss on her lips. Tedious means tiresome because of length or dullness: boring. Pretty sure that's not what you meant :) A kiss isn't tedious unless it's with... Severus Snape, for example :D Anyway, I think you might have meant either tenuous or tentative, both of which would have worked in this situation. So, if you ever feel like it, you might want to go back and edit that. It kind of made me stop in the middle of this really, really romantic and beautiful scene and go "Um. Ron finds kissing Hermione tedious? I thought he was in love with her! That can't be good!" Sorry if I was too harsh, I honestly did not mean to offend, I really liked this. ~writergirl8

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I love this story. The added part about Molly was great!

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Very well done. Great job.

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awww, shucks, how romantic, were they already together when this happenned? i mean according to u

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i give a 100/100 instead of 10/10. that was good. i liked it.

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aww, too cute!
i love this song too.

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Awww I love this story. I was listening to this song yesterday night but it was the cover by new found glory

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That was really cute :] Not a masterpiece, but cute nonetheless.

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very very very very very cute. double cool with knobs. i love the song. keep up the writing your great at it

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aww cute story!!!

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good job! i love the song you used ine of my favs!

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Great, I like the way you write

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This is a very cute story. I liked it.

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absolutely adorable!

LOVED IT!

r/hr forever!

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That was really cute! I love that song! You captured the R/H so wonderfully through your words!

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