aw. Thats so sad! why are all the good stories so sad. and why does herione have to die in so many stories?and why does ron have to be so sad in every single story?Author's Response: I am sorry I do not really know. I wish that fan fiction could be kinder to the characters though! Report Review
That was sad. I liked it a lot. Good job.Author's Response: thanks
This was a pretty good one-shot. I think that you incorperated the "Fate has never been kind to us" thing well to go along with the title. My only suggestion for this chapter would have to be to add more detail. It was missing a little bit of that in there. Show more of Ron's inner deeper feelings. Things that he doesn't say aloud to Harry or Hermione. (Oh, totally random, but I love your banner. Very, very good.)
The only mistake that I found in here was that you said they were married, and then said that they weren't married. I was a little confused there, but I am assuming that they were? Oh, and also at one point you spelled yourself as two separate words.
Other than that it was a great read, as well as a great plot line. =DAuthor's Response: Thanks, that means a lot. I know I didn'tchange that I am off to change the married thing. ANd about getting into Ron's head I know I know, the worts part is that I all ways get on people for that. I'll re write it soon. I know. Wel;,l once again thanks:) Report Review
aww that was so sad! but a nice little oneshot! great writing as usual!
p.s you were reading and reviewing 'when character meets actor', so hopefully a fan of it! well, it isnt allowed to be posted on this site anymore for legal reasons, and i cant change it to follow the rules. but if you're still interested in reading it, email me at email@example.com
~Rose :)Author's Response: Right I'll email you soon:) Report Review
awe that was really cute... but i didnt get it, why is Hermione called Hermione Weasley and then near the end, Ron says "I am never going to be given the chance to take her on our first date or kiss her or purpose or marry have kids or grow old with Hermione"- but if they got married, i would of thought that they went out on their first date, wouldnt they? and ron would habe proposed to her... im just a bit confused... nice story ~hljAuthor's Response: Oh, man thanks for cething that. I worte it as two diffrent one shots then combined them. I'll go and cange that:) Report Review
OMG! That was sad. I think that you probably should have included movements though, instead of "harry said", "Ron said". Good job, though.Author's Response: Yeah, I'm really bad at that. Well., thanks:) Report Review
awww ***tear*** tear***Author's Response: Um thanks:) Report Review
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