I was wondering why they didn't just use the marauders map.

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You captured Dumbledore's personality perfectly, although Slughorn's felt just a tiny bit off.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. It was just a refreshing and light read and was great! Awesome job!

Happy writing,
classicblack

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Really this chapter was adorable. Lily and James are just the cutest and this chapter was just really funny and sweet.

So that ending was just perfect. "Lily Potter"- I love how you manage to throw all this foreshadowing in without breaking the plot.

Nice chapter!
Happy writing,
classicblack

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"Though Lily held onto Snape's hand, it was James she used for support to get up." I think that's the most foreshadowing I've read in a sentence ever! She holds on Snape's friendship, but falls in love with James! Wow, nicely done!

Aww James is so sweet. Again I ask: can I have my own?

Fantastic chapter!
Happy writing,
classicblack

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James, shame on you- taking advantage of Lily! But it was cute all the same ;)

So Lily is looking for the Slytherin common room to find/ apologize to Snape? Ah, I see. A bit of foreshadowing for their future fallout after OWLs.

Hilariously-done chapter!
Happy writing,
classicblack

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Personally, I chuckled heartily when the House Elves attacked the Marauders in the library. It was so funny! I love Sirius's go-to response: "I couldn't see it!" haha

I wonder what Lily needs to do?

I forgot to mention this before, but I love that your chapters aren't too long- it makes your story an easy read for someone who just wants some humour and fluff *raises hand*

Wonderful chapter.
Happy writing,
classicblack

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Ah Remus, I love him and his good sense!

Sirius banned from the kitchens- hahaha oh my gosh I laughed so hard when the hosue elves turned mutinous!

I suppose James is now regretting not listening to the painting- who I did love, as well!

You've really got a gift for wit!

Wonderful chapter!
Happy writing,
classicblack

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"Sweetheart" Why can't I have my own James? Honestly, he's just so sweet and perfect.

Now that my mini-rant is over, I'd like to say how much I liked this chapter. Lily really is the funniest drunk I've read yet! You make her sound a bit like Winky with the hiccups, haha.

I liked how you set it up so we thought that Lily and James would safely get back to the common room, but that Lily, being the adorable drunk she is, ran off! I can't wait to read about the wild goose chase that is sure to come of this.

Great chapter!
Happy writing,
classicblack

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So I discovered this story because someone recommended it in the 'Quality' Stories section of the forums and I can see why. It's really well-written and seems to me to just be adorably filled with fluff and romance.

I like how you tied in Lily and Snape's friendship and sort of gave an indirect explanation as to why James tormented Snape so much when he was trying to win Lily over. Don't know if you meant to do that, but it was really nice!

I love the idea of a drunk Lily! Most authors never really imagine the idea that the perfect Lily Evans would be such a funny drunk! This is a really creative idea and I like that it won't end with Lily and James together because it takes place in 5th year. It will just be light and fluffy which will be a nice change from what I usually read, haha.

Can't wait to read more!
Happy writing,
classicblack

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Cool story! It was kind of mushy but it was a good type of mushy. Not to little not to much.

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Hahahahahah
funny
Aw
sweet

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Sweet and short! Just the perfect combination

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This is a really good story
I am going to see if you have any others

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Adorable! I really liked all the boys' banter.

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Haha, she does remember!

I really enjoyed it. It was so funny.

Bravo to you.

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I hope she remembers all of this in the morning.

Bravo to you.

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Wait, twelve glasses or twelve bottles?

I wonder what she said.

Bravo to you.

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I told you, you stupid boys. She's got to talk her friend.

Sheesh.

Bravo to you.

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She's got to talk to Severus.

Bravo to you.

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She's Lily Evans, of course she's going to the library.

Bravo to you.

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Poor Lily.

At least she has James to help her. ;)

Bravo to you.

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Awesome story!

Maybe a yes at the end would have been nice though, even though it's sorta cliche.

Random, but I like your 'the end' graphic hehes.
Good story :)

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Love it
The Lily Potter is a nice touch :)

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Interesting idea!
It's to find Snape isn't it?
Reading more -
I hope someone saves Moony.. o-o

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HAHAHHAHAA
I absolutely LOVE the ending of this chapter!
It's awesome!
GO MOONY!

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