Wow! I really liked it! You got it dead on with the angst and everything, all of the characters are just how they should be. LOVE IT.Author's Response: Thanks. I didn't think that George would be as happy as he had been with Fred, but I couldn't picture him closing down Weasley's Wizard Weezes. He still has a bit of humor left, and he needs that now more than ever. Report Review
Pretty darn good start to your story. I like this, and how it's going, it looks like it is going to be a realistic story about the aftermath of Fred's death, not a dumb crazy one. Death in a family can cause so much trauma... Poor George. :(
Anyway, keep it up weasleygirl!
(PUPPY TOES!!) Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I wanted it to be realistic. Yeah it can cause a lot of trauma, and George is a long from recovery, but he'll get there eventually. At least as much as he can without Fred. Report Review
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