Rawr.
Lovely, NO SEV DON'T TURN TO THE DARK SIDE
& a spy eh? Oh I say :3

My lappys slow, I'll read more later darling; intreaged though.

DEMENTORS O;



Author's Response: xD
fanks you. (:

your laptop's slow?
smack it. ;D
it should work then. xD
xooxoxx

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Ok I know I should of reviewed earlier but I just have to say this story is brilliant.

P.S.
Are Alana and Sirius gonna get together?

Author's Response: Aww, thank you. ;D
And you'll just have to wait and see now, won't you? xD
xo

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Sorry this stroy is good and stuff, but haven't u like completely copied it?
i've read so many bits in other stories before.
the whole seer thing and dumbledoor skipping?

i was gonna read anyway but pouring her heart out to some dog who just happened to have Sirius's grey eyes?

sorry about such a mean review but its not fair to copy stuff.
although we have kinda taken everything of J.Ks . . .

sorry again, but i think you should change those bits.
you have AMAZING disclaimers btw. lol. i love them.

Author's Response: Hi. :)

Thanks for the review.
I enjoy constructive criticism.

:)

And, just so you know, I haven't copied anything from this story.
It's all a sum of my twisted imagination.
So, sorry, but I haven't copied.

And this story - and my character - entirely AU. If you've have read on, you'd have known that the conversation with Snuffles is a key point in the story.

I know it's not written the best and i'm in the middle of rewriting now, but I think if you just give it a chance, then you might like it. :)

Thanks anyway.
xo

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love it! of course i wouldn't have objected if u had kept on writting ur old version. but i like this perspective too!

UPDATE SOON!
~clover

Author's Response: thanks soo much!! :D

i would have crried on writing the old version, but i'm sufferng with major WB atm in the plot line.

I know what's going to happen, just i dont know hoe to put it into words.
D:

thanks anyways!!

xo

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Gawd I love this story!
but did you copie bits from other stories ... ?
cos i swear i read the whole seer thing in that tree hugger story and the bit about the skipping ... ?
or maybe its the same story and im just being totally confsed as per usual.
anyway 10/10 for amaazing chapter!

Author's Response: nahh, this whole story is just a crazy representation of my twisted imagination. (:

thnks for the review. xo

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wow. why is the potion a problem? oh i'll just read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Well, I must have explained this looooooooads of times. I'll have to put it in an authors notw why it's bad...
You see, If Voldemort gets good luck, then that's bad.
Get me?

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i love. gotta read the next chapter.

Author's Response: =D!

x

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wow. i like. ok off to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: You do that!
NEW READER!!
=D
xxx

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He knows he knows he knows!
What kind of problems?
Update! NOW!
Please:))?

loooved it:) didn't think it could turn out this way and I liked it:))

kisses:)*
Laura:)

Author's Response: Yes he does indeed know.
You'll have to read the next chapter to know the problems. :)

And the next chapter's JUST been validated. :))

I know, it DID take a bit of a twist didnt it?

:)

xx
Stacey
xoxoxo

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Alana is very, how do I say it? Very outspoken...

Author's Response: Yuhuh.
She is indeed.
Not afraid to say what she feels.
:)

Thanks for the review.

xoxox

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lol stacey! U have an amazing imagination...! I love it! I really love Alana's Sacrasm. She cheers me up! I love it girl and i cant wait for more! Great job! ~Damsel ps- i have a new chapter up! U should check it out and tell me what u think! love ya lots!

Author's Response: Aww thank you!
Alana's sarcasm is what i like best about her. Shes not afraid to say what she thinks and I wish i could be more like her in that department.
:)
THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!!

P.S, Will do. Ill leave a review too!!

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Hehe Remus knows. rnWonder what the others will say when they find out.rnGood chapter.

Author's Response: Thank You SOOOOOOOOOOO much!!!
:DDDD

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short but cute... what was the dream about? lol i love it! good job!

Author's Response: MUAHAHAHA! You'll have to read on to see!!!

And I know it's short. Writers block (Y)

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i know how the rejection thing goes... chapter 8 of my story has been rejected 3 times so far. but alas. i finally have some free time and thought i'd read ur updates! I really like the Snuffles part... i find it really cute! Hopefull once my story is updated u'll review for me! lol but this was wonderful and im off to read more! Great job Stacey!

~Damsel

Author's Response: Thank you soooooo much! I've been okay with the validation for the last two chapters. Let's hope it stays that way. :P

xx

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At the very moment I am listening to the song, that you wrote about...mm, feels so perfect to happily sit here, while it is snowing outside, and to read one more chapter of a beautiful story :)
Thank you for updating ;) Though yeah, it's a short one, but a good one nevertheless :)

Author's Response: HEYY!
Like, i've said to the others, and what i forgot to put on the chapter --sheepish smile--, it IS indeed short, but the next one should be LONGER and BETTER.
So, should be around two more days in validation and... WAM!
We;re there.
:D

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great chapter!

Author's Response: THANKS!!!

Next chapter should be here soon

Stacey
xxx

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Yey:)))
At last!
Don't you dare to take so much time while updating the next chapter;)
Loved it, though it was short. The next one will be longer, right???

Will be waiting:)

kisses:)*

Author's Response: =DDDDDDDDD
The next chapter should be a longer one, and i think if the next chapter is the one im thinking off, is the best one so far.
Should be here soooon.

Stacey
xxx

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I like this stor y, looking forward to the next chapter...

Author's Response: THANKS!!
Next chapter should be here soon. :)
THanks for reviewing

Stacey
xxx

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Haha every chapter has something weird that makes me burst into fits of laughter. What was it this time?

"Get it? Wink? Eye? –Sigh— Readers... So hard to please now a days"

Sorry to quote but I loved it that much. And the bit with the dog (is it Sirius?) was so cute. (for want of a better word)

Author's Response: I hope to add a funny bit to every chapter. I admit this story's a bit... depressing so I thought "I know, let's make it a depressing comedy!" and I know that sounds absoultly... impossible, but i'm trying...

And you'll have to wait and see if it's Sirius. :)

xxx

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YAY! You mentioned not only one of my favourite bands but also my second favourite song (after 4AM Forever) of theirs.

Great chapter btw

I love the argument with herself in her mind I like...never do that *shifty eyes*

Author's Response: Lostprophets = (LOVE)

I love Rooftops and Town Called Hypocrisy (sp?) and Broken Hearts and Torn Up Letters and Last Train Home... so yeah...

Thanks!!!

And yeah, me too. NEVER ever... Like no...

xxx

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OMG A cliffy! Another one!

I think that this is a brill story, and I will be tracking it through my Google page, and I shall review EVERY chapter.

Byeee!

slytherin_goddess_24

Author's Response: OH MY JEEZ!!

Thank you sooooo much for reviewing!! I'll hopefully get the next chapter up soon.

If I can be bothered enough, that is...

xxx

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Still a very good story - NO plot kinks in this one!

slytherin_goddess_24

Author's Response: =D

Thank goodness!!

xxx

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Hey,

So far, this story is pretty good! You're grammar is great, there are no plot kinks, and the characters are believable.

However, there is ONE thing that took me a little bit to work out. In the flashback scene with Dumbledore, you have written: I didn't give an answer, just went straight to the man in front of me.

This didn't click exactly, as I thought you meant the man in front of Alana when Snape asked her if she would be a Deatheater or not, not the man she was sitting in front of when she had the flashback.

Okay, enough criticism! I really liked the way you had Lucius with his head in Narcissa's lap - I thought that was a clever way to link to the book, and the same with the Dementor idea.

So far, I think this is a really good story. See you next chapter!

slytherin_goddess_24

P.S

I told you I would review!

Author's Response: Thanks soooooooo much for reviewing!!!

I never thought of the situation with Snape/Alana/Dumbledore thing like that...

Obv, i can't change it, but that you sooo much for pointing it out. I hope you understand now.

Thanks again for your comments!!!!!

xxxx

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Now that was something I didn't get, but I hope you'll explain more in the next chapter :) what does Felix Felicis have to do with..mm, project?
Anyway, I liked it :) and btw, nice banner ;)
Looking forward the next chapter (it'll be soon, right? :) )

Author's Response: I'll update ASAP I promise!! Well, if Voldemort gets the Felix, then he has good luck.
That means that everything goes KABOOM.
:)
Hope that clears things up!
And you can thank Laura for the AWESOME banner!!

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Hello again :)
The very first line of this chapter is hilarious ;))
"Disclaimer: HA! I own EVERYTHING! –JKGlares—Err... Okay... I own everything that JK doesn’t own...?"
And it gets more and more interesting :)
Also, I loved that conversation with her own ego :)) Reminded me of myself ;)
Great story, keep it up :) and I can't wait when they finally know that Alana's good :) well, you know :) kinda :)


Author's Response: Why thank you!
I do try...
Lol @ the ego thing.
Same with me.
I often have arguments in my head, which leads to shouting at myself outloud, which leads to scary stares...

:)

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