LOVE IT!!! I trully love your style of writing !! ill be reading more of your stuff when i get a chance!! ;)

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OOH!! I loved it! I love the irony that you used! :7)

Author's Response: *grins* Thank you! I love that you pointed that out, I really enjoy hearing about the parts the reader likes! Thanks again.

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i love it.it's so sweet and absolutly adorable.

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wow i really liked that! it was sooo cute and also excellently written in my opinion. the way you personified hermione was perfect!

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I really liked this. It was really profound, almost being in a way of not meaning to, and i like how it was sort of turned around to sort of, conspicuate (if that is ever a word) the shame he felt of his scarred hand, and - oh, it was just wonderful.
Hermione was very in character - i can just imagine he exactly like that - she's 15 here, right? this is set in book 5? and it was just so - great.
thankyou, you really made my day :)
ariane x

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I've read almost ALL of your stoies and they are SOO good! I love them keep up the good work!

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aw i like it alot way to go!
-iliana

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I liked the storyline, I liked the moment set in a familiar time...I don't know. Something seemed off in pacing...trying to be constructive. The rhythm seemed odd. I don't know how to put it.



Author's Response: Thank you, I think... I did write this in a very short period of time, but I was going for a suddenness in the story when Harry tripped as well as a suddenness for him, so I could see how it might feel like an improper lead-in to that part.

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not bad...pretty good actually, made me smile.

Author's Response: Yay! Always a great reaction to have. I'm glad you liked it!

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