4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by sunny_day Cahpter 3

19th March 2005:
a twin sister! well that was unexpected... and sirius has a daughter? hus the mother? where have they been all this time?why hasnt anyone known about it? did remus know? does sally have a scar like harry? so many questions!!!!!!!!lol i want to know the answers!!! i want another chapter! more more more!!! keep writing your doing a great job!

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Review #2, by lilperuvybabi Chapter one

16th January 2004:
It was pretty good. Couple of tips of advice, work on the spelling, its pretty good, but write it on word or something which can help u with grammer and spelling. I like the plot. Draco turns good..hehe..but maybe u r evil n make it as if Draco looks like hes turning good but really is only doing it to go back to the dark lord and tell him everything, that would be such a good plot. My story is also named the year everything changed, haha, nice coincidense, thats y I had to read it, except mine is of L&J but this is of Harry. Can't wait till you update, hope its soon!

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Review #3, by The Spastic Cat Chapter one

16th January 2004:
I enjoyed it a lot. It was really quite good, and I enjoyed the concept. A little more editing would make it e the less. You have real talent.better, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. You have real talent. I'll be watching out for more stories by you, articulalry those that you've made with your own characters, settings, etc.... You are a bright girl, with a vivid imagination. Keep up the good work. *cheers*

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Review #4, by James Chapter one

14th January 2004:
It was fairly good, You need to work on the presentation e.g. spelling, layout but it had a good idea behind it. personally I preffered draco as a villain.

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