This is definitely intriguing… I've never read anything like it before..
A really great start, good characterisation on the Grey Lady, perfect really. The idea of this collab is great.

And whoever wrote this wrote it really well! :)

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Of course I read this first quite long ago, but I noticed that I haven't reviewed it yet.

This is a really original story. I liked it that we here have an elf that we don't really feel for much in the end showing that not all elves are good and pitiable. Though I'm wondering a bit if this was somewhat on the Lestranges' orders. But I guess they would have thaught the magic to the elf themselves in that case. It also gives a very good reason for a passion that Cho seems to have here. Though I hope Cho would be fair in her job at the ministry if she got it and not judge everyone as a Toxey. Great chapter!

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I really liked this story! First I was a bit afraid it was something about a metamorphmagus, but then it turned out not to be that. I think her mum was quite mean, or really she didn't understand at all how her much shyer daughter felt. I liked how it ended with Orla not thinking that her hair was cool or something like her mum thought, but simply accepting it and ignoring the people who teased her about it. I also like it that she learned to find her real friends that way.

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BTW this is wink also- YAY good job guys! I can't wait for the rest to be up!

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Oh, this is even better than when I last read it! I love the new bit about posiedon, although I must be stupid, because it took me ages to figure out that 3-ended wand was his trident. Silly me.

Buut, good job! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review!!! I'm happy you liked it. I was in fact quite happy with the idea about the three ended wand :D And you figured it out eventually, so you're not stupid at all.

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That was beautiful, with the inspiration and the hippogriffs. You must have had to do lots of research! It suits Luna too. I really loved that.
-Caitlin

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yes I did some research. That wasn't too hard though. Just a little google search ;) Then I chose what I wanted and used it as I wanted.

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I forgot to review the first time I read this, so I'm doing it now. Great job, really nice. A tad bit short, okay really short. But there really wasn't much more that could be added especially when you don't fully know what the rest of the people in the collaberation are going to write.
-Caitlin

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good job Andrina!! it's a really good story

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!!

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Yay I cant wait to read the rest!!

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I can't wait to read the rest and hopefully I will be able to write one.

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that was really good!! i can't wait for the rest! i want to know the stories!!!

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This sounds like it's going to be amazing.

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