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Review #1, by ioname2you The Excitement!!!

12th June 2008:
brilliant start to the story
update soon please

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Review #2, by lovette The Excitement!!!

10th April 2008:
please continue love it

Author's Response: Thanx
dear was out for quite a time
now am back
thanx for ur review
that really brings me back....cheers
newt part would be there in a week atmost


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Review #3, by yoooo Privet Drive Is no More Private!

13th September 2007:
Party Time and why on earth a Party. What could be so important?? Not just a birthday... Can it?
The Excitement!!!
















'Harry, you have a house or I may say two. Dude, don’t know how many lives I’ll need to make one of my own.' said Ron as he pushed Harry inside the House.


'How two' said Harry as he continued staring at Hermione. Man, she has grown into a woman. Specially, the area below her neck has been giving her more attractive look than before.


'Count the Grimauld one too, git' said Ron forcing him to look the other side and Hermione still weeping. Ron opened the door as they reached it and as they moved inside Harry saw the most beautiful drawing room he has seen in his entire life. Actually, he had never seen many. Dursleys never took him to too many places.


But this was huge. It was around half of the Great Hall at Hogwarts. The room was divided into two parts. First one consisted of the sofas with pillows neatly arranged on it. It had a table in between which had space enough for all Ron, Hermione and himself too sleep on it comfortably. Then he imagined Hermione lying next to him. He tried to throw it out of his mind but the thoughts of playing with Hermione’s hair took him down. He was in his thoughts when something hit him hard on his head and then he realized that he had been standing there and drooling for quite a time till now when Ron slapped him.

‘What’ said Harry trying to look innocent.


‘Well actually that was my line’ said Ron with a grin on his dirty face. Harry just wanted him to kick Ron's mouth shut. Well, okay he was doing a bit peeping but what is bad in it. Alright, its bad. But he is a boy. These bad things are allowed for boys. And this git Ron was a boy too. Wait, can he have the same feeling for Hermione. He would be sorry if he does have. He did act wierd when she went to the Yule Ball with Krum last to last year. And can Hermione like him. Wish he could curse Ron. Uh-oh now he was getting jealous too.


-SLAP-
He realized that this time he had punched Ron and got a slap in return making him return to his senses. Hard way of getting one into his senses, he should try something new and less painful like shaking or throwing water.


'Harry, mate, i think you need to go St.Mungo's' said Ron frightened by Harry's behaviour.


'Me fine' said Harry without looking at them and went without them to look around the house.


After deciding his and hermoine's bedroom and kids room he still was left with most parts of house unseen. If it was not bigger than hogwarts then it was not smaller than it too.


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Review #4, by den Privet Drive Is no More Private!

5th September 2007:
'Harry, you have a house or I may say two. Dude, don’t how many lives I’ll need to make one of my own.' said Ron as he pushed Harry inside the House.


'How two' said Harry as he continued staring at Hermione. Man, she has grown into a woman. Specially, the area below her neck has been giving her more attractive look than before.


'Count the Grimauld one too, git' said Ron forcing him to look the other side and Hermione still weeping. Ron opened the door as they reached it and as they moved inside Harry saw the most beautiful drawing room he has seen in his entire life. Actually, he had never seen many. Dursleys never took him to too many places.


But this was huge. It was around half of the Great Hall at Hogwarts. The room was divided into two parts. First one consisted of the sofas with pillows neatly arranged on it. It had a table in between which had space enough for all Ron, Hermione and himself too sleep on it comfortably. Then he imagined Hermione lying next to him. He tried to throw it out of his mind but the thoughts of playing with Hermione’s hair took him down. He was in his thoughts when something hit him hard on his head and then he realized that he had been standing there and drooling for quite a time till now when Ron slapped him.

‘What’ said Harry trying to look innocent.


‘Well actually that was my line’ said Ron with a grin on his dirty face. Harry just wanted him to stop. Because he knew he was caught


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Review #5, by Roxyt Privet Drive Is no More Private!

30th August 2007:
'Harry, you have a house or I may say two. Dude, don’t how many lives I’ll need to make one of my own.' said Ron as he pushed Harry inside the House.


'How two' said Harry as he continued staring at Hermione. Man, she has grown into a woman. Specially, the area below her neck has been giving her more attractive look than before.


'Count the Grimauld one too, git' said Ron forcing him to look the other side and Hermione still weeping. Ron opened the door as they reached it and as they moved inside Harry saw the most beautiful drawing room he has seen in his entire life. Actually, he had never seen many. Dursleys never took him to too many places.


But this was huge. It was around half of the Great Hall at Hogwarts. The room was divided into two parts. First one consisted of the sofas with pillows neatly arranged on it. It had a table in between which had space enough for all Ron, Hermione and himself too sleep on it comfortably. Then he imagined Hermione lying next to him. He tried to throw it out of his mind but the thoughts of playing with Hermione’s hair took him down. He was in his thoughts when something hit him hard on his head and then he realized that he had been standing there and drooling for quite a time till now when Ron slapped him.

‘What’ said Harry trying to look innocent.


‘Well actually that was my line’


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Review #6, by da roxtar potter Privet Drive Is no More Private!

29th August 2007:
'Harry, dude, u have a house or i may two' said Ron as he pushed Harry inside the House.



'How two' said Harry as he continued staring at Hermoine. Man, she has grown into a woman. Specially the area below her neck.



'Count the Grimauld one too, git' said Ron and as they reached the door opened it and as they moved in Harry saw the most beautiful living room he has seen in his entire life. Actually, he had never seen many. Dursleys never took him to many places.



But this was huge. The room was divided into two parts

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Review #7, by Da Roxtar Potter Privet Drive Is no More Private!

29th August 2007:
Dumbledore assured him that he was not goingto do it, but didn't think that it was important why in the hell he wasn't ing to do it.

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Review #8, by Da Roxtar Potter Privet Drive Is no More Private!

29th August 2007:
U rock

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Review #9, by Ed Potter Privet Drive Is no More Private!

22nd August 2007:
If dis is ur first story den u seem to be a gud writer. needs more practise though. But no one here is a born Shakespeare.

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