This is so good! I love how you interpreted Sevvy and had him be with Hestia. It's all really good writing, really well done. 10/10.
When will you add more? I'm also following your Px5 and Severely Severus, and it looks like you've abandoned the 2nd one. Please write more! Report Review
Wow. I just read this whole story and I am in AWE. I've always wanted to write somehting pretty much Peter centered but I love the way you've written this from hestia Jones's pov and had her having relationships with both Peter and Sirius. It all makes so much sense.
I loved the way you had the Marauders treating Peter all along, his insecurities and everything else about it. Then him turning over to Voldermort - pure brilliance. I have loved the Peter pov's and of course the hestia ones it's aalll really brilliant.
This is one of my favourite stories I have to say - I hate the way so many ff authours just leave out Peter because they don't like him, and I'm really glad you wrote this.
I've also read your other stories about Snape and i must say they're all brillant, but I like this one best, especially with all the chapter summaries being bits about rats - genious! Please carry on with this, because I reallly reallly love it :D
Thank you so much for writing this Report Review
I NEED MORE!! MORE MORE MORE! Report Review
POOR PETER!! I can't stand it... it's awful! but I love this story! it's amazing. I think you need to scan all the chapters for typos... at first I didn't mind but I think you should know. Report Review
tee hee! that was great! Report Review
Awe. That makes me SO SAD! Report Review
OH MY GOSH I DID NOT EXPECT THAT AT ALL! and you know EXACTLY what I'm talking about! Report Review
OH MY GOSH!! The end of this chapter was pure GENIUS! Report Review
I got a little confused between who's Hestia and who's Liliana. Report Review
Umm, wow. That was, I'll admit, strangely funny. Report Review
Peter Pettigrew, at this point kind of remind me of Gollum. What with the talking partly in the first person, partly in the third person. Report Review
Are there seriously so many more chapters? You have way more patience than I do. Report Review
I cried reading the 'article' you are an amazing writer. Report Review
w.o.w. I don't really have a lot to say. No criticism or anything. Report Review
(Cry, cry, sob, sniffle) Oh. My. Gosh. That was... (sniffle) I don't know WHAT that was... Report Review
Oh my GOSH! You have no idea how much that affected my opinion of Pettigrew. THANK YOU! Report Review
I liked your idea for the Hogwarts graduation. Report Review
Oh nice! I like it very much. Report Review
Wonderful. Just fabulous. I positively ADORE teen romance. Report Review
I wish I was more creative... That was great! I am SO excited! Report Review
this is really good. i picked random story and this was what came up. ur an awesome writer. KEEP WRITITNG! Report Review
I think I actually read all this before. But, oh well, it's good enough to read twice. I love layed you've made Severus, if that makes sense. There's just so much going on in his brain. I love it :) Report Review
I think this is where I was. So good. I love how well you write his point of view, too. Fantastic :) Report Review
I honestly have no idea where I am in this story. I know that I reviewed the chapter before this one, so I'm assuming this is where I was. It's going to take me a minute to get back into it, though. I'm just sorry that I've been absent for so long, 'cuz I really do love this story. :) Report Review
i love this! when will u updattte?! Report Review
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