Reading Reviews for Breakfast of Champions
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Review #1, by Molliewobbles Breakfast of Champions

2nd September 2007:
Wow, so cute! Great job! You did a really good job of keeping both of them in character. Keep writing!


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Review #2, by NevillesSoulmate Breakfast of Champions

13th August 2007:
I'm a sucker for Neville/Luna! One of mine is actually supposed to validate today, but we'll see. I really enjoyed your characterization of both Neville and Luna, Luna especially. I felt you included a bit too much of the 'movie Luna' with lines about pudding, but I laughed out loud when I found out what she was eating for breakfast and why. That's such an... unusual choice for breakfast, which makes it perfect for her. Very good job. 9/10.

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