I liked this chapter...nice job. Report Review
I think this would be better without the authors notes. It makes it look like you'r defensive about the story, or you're apologising for it, which you don't need to, it's fine.
10/10Author's Response: Thanks for the advice, I see how it can be read that way. Report Review
Well I never read the old version but this ones okay, nothing is really going on so far, I hope its gets more dramatic or whatever. Report Review
like the story. shame you havent updated in a while! :0
10/10 TWO THUMBS UP!
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this is so cute, i like the little mention of harry and james snr.
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I really, really liked this chapter! I saw only a few spelling mistakes, but that's nothing to really worry about. But besides that, it was great! I can't wait to read more :)Author's Response: Thank you! I can't wait to write more! Report Review
i hve no idea why, buhi juss cudnt stop smiling thruout this chappie!!
10/10!Author's Response: I'm glad! Smiles are what I aim for! Report Review
I really like this story so far. I never read one quite like this, so it will be interesting to see how it turns out! Anyway, fantastic job! This is going on my favorites and definitaly deserves a 10/10!Author's Response: *cheers* I like to think that originality is one of my more... endearing qualities ^^ Report Review
I like your story. Your characters are interesting, or like Nolan - weird! =)
Hope you update soon!Author's Response: I'll take 'weird' as a good thing ^^;
But thanks! Report Review
I really liked it.
Keep up the good work!
Lily123Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
Hurry and review please!Author's Response: er, do you mean hurry and write? Report Review
lol well this is cute... i havnt really read any next generation fics but im sure this'll b good...
i though gin was a little to harsh to james just for sticking his tounge out...lol soo weird to think of them as parents :DAuthor's Response: haha, isn't it? I couldn't resist writing that part about Ginny threatening James. It seemed to add a bit of Mrs. Weasley's mothering habits to her character. Report Review
I hope you update soon Report Review
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