Brill Story [3 cookies for you] damn now i want a really cookie lol
HugsAuthor's Response: yes! I love cookies ;-) and reviews Report Review
you know that story could easily be pulled out of harry potter context and used for just a regular story? just a thoughtAuthor's Response: I probably will actually ;-) I did it for a few of them. Report Review
OMG!! Thatwas soo sweet!Author's Response: Thank you :-) Report Review
Okay, I put that line below there, and I had a whole review typed out, but it only submitted that line... Whatev. That's my faovurite line of that song, which is one of my all time favourites! This oneshot was amazing--I absolutely LOVED it. Full round of applause sent your way! =) --Kate/RPAuthor's Response: Thanks kate :-) It's mine too Report Review
"But my God it’s so beautiful when the boy smiles." Author's Response: which is my favorite line from the entire song ;-) Report Review
I really liked it :) You did great! It was extremely well written. I'm sure you've heard it before, but it would be better if you carried it on, maybe into a short story? Like, go through the troubles of him drinking and just go into it in more depth. But, of course, its great :) You don't have to change anything if you don't want to haha. :)Author's Response: Ah haaaa... Yeah... sequals and I don't normaly happen. Just becuase I have the attention span of a fruit fly lol We'll have to see about this one :-) Thank you for the review! Report Review
That was so adorable. A bit off Cannon seeing as James and Lily were 21 when they died, but I'm assuming that is largely in part becasue it fits with the song.
Great story though.
--DACAuthor's Response: Well yeah :-) I don't like cannon writing O:-) but yes, you were right, it was to fit the song this time :-) Thank you for your review! Report Review
Oh wow =]
I really really enjoyed this one-shot! It gave a complete different spin on the James/Lily ship. Everyone always has them getting together at some point in 7th year...i've never really thought of it from this way. And, i also think it's excellent how you got Lily to like James. Alot of james/lily stories have it so that she's liked him all along and one day she just realises it. But this was so much more realistic =D She usually falls for him because he's stopped being immature and whatever...but this worked so much better! I find it hard to get them together in one chapter, and i usually don't like one-shots about them because they're so unrealistic. But, this one had a background which we had very little detail about, yet it was enough to kind of sense Lily and James' relationship. It was great =]
-Alex-Author's Response: Thank you for your nice long review!! I really appreciatate how much you liked it :-) Report Review
THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!
please write another!Author's Response: Aw thank you! We'll see about more L/J one shots Brighteset features them though :-) Report Review
Awww, I love James/Lily! You've convinced me to write my own song fic! and I especially love this story because its cute without being, you know, TOO cute. Nice work... Author's Response: :-) Thank you! I'm happy I could do that! Report Review
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