I really did love it. Except the spacing. Oh Gawd. That was kinda horrendous. Dx Next time, just to lax on the spacing. The chapter was long, but mostly because of the unnecessary spacing. 9/10.

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I 'm feeling merciful. Because Spacingof Scaryness.Beats Paragraphs of Doom. I can't believe a version of my name is being used. I'm currently having a inner A.Wingard moment that I refuse to write . It does indeed suck.That's all. Why not continue if people actually like this crap. I have no right to stop people who enjoy Sue/Stu stories

Author's Response: um... ok?

-- Miranda and Sarah

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i don't like stories about random people. i like the ones with lily/james/sirius all main characters and o/c's kinda in the backround or best friends. but i did like this... i didnt like the part where she said lily was a bitch bc i love lily-- her and ginny are my favorites. but i understand you are being different and i like that. i might continue with this story but i not sure. it was ver well written. Great job!!

Nikki!
writting wise-- 10/10
but it just wasn't my "cup of tea" as my grandpa says
i give it a 8/10

Author's Response: Sorry you didn't like it but thank-you for reading and reviewing, I think one of our other storys that we are still planning might be better for you.

Toddles,
Sarah and Miranda

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fantastic story :)

Author's Response: Thanks! =]
We're working on chapter two right now.
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Miranda and Sarah

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Hmm, I liked it. It was okay, but a few things seemed a bit sudden. I mean Ahri's crying. I wasn't really expecting it. You know? But I must say, Truth or Dare with the Marauders? That's funny! But the fighting was a bit weird. I mean I understand that Alex and Ed are over protective brothers. But I dunno... Poor Sirius I guess. Lol.

Overall I thought it was pretty good. I liked how James kissed Lily, and how she slapped him. I thought Remus and Ellie's bet was funny too. Good first chapter though!
-Ginny

Author's Response: I think that future chapters may explain Ahri's over-emotionalness. Or I should say I hope. Hmm. I'll have to think about this. lol
We are both glad you liked it though. =]
And just so you know, Sarah is the one who came up with the Remus/Ellie bet.
Thanks!
Miranda and Sarah

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when i first opened this up.. i thought i might get bored cos it is really really long.. BUT i must say i was hooked the whole way through cos it was so good.. i love all the characters and found it very funny that Lily snogged James haha.. keep up the good work.. i'll make sure to read your next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks so much! When we first started we really didn't think that the chapter would be this long, but we both really got into the story. =] Next chapter is in the works as we speak...or type. Whatever. =P
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Miranda and Sarah

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YAY... Love it... so Proud^_^... lol yes Miranda I know your going to say I'm a dork for Reveiwing a Story that I half Wrote but... It turned out awesome... and long... anywho love it 10/10

Peace,
Sarah

Author's Response: Sarah...
You are a dork.
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Miranda

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