Very intriguing, I'm hooked! I loved the descriptions, I can tell it's going to be a great story. I can't wait to read the next chapter! :) Report Review
Yay, i love fics based on bellatrix, this was a really great fic, i really njoyed reading it Report Review
Awesome and please write more thanks. Report Review
wow...its good so far...hope ya write more! Report Review
its cool, is riddle her dad?
rite next chapter soon Report Review
love it it sounds really good
mrs. weasley Report Review
Bella! I love seeing a different perspective on her, I can't wit to see what happens nextAuthor's Response: I've never read a story where Bella is innocent, maybe you could recommend one? Apart from Bellatrix/Harry fics, I don't like them. Report Review
Interesting start...can't wait to see how this finishes.
Nicely writtenAuthor's Response: I've got scenes from the time period in my head, but it's only a prologue - from chapter 1 onwards it'll be in the present. Maybe I'll do a prequel of sorts one day. Anyway, you'll find out more or less what happened after that later.
Alexannah :) Report Review
I got a little confused in this chapter, I thought Dumbledore was supposed to be her father, and then I realised that she was going to him for help and her real father was Tom. Sorry, this was probably my fault not yours. After my confusion had worn off, I quite enjoyed this chapter, it was very interesting.Author's Response: Yeah, I think that was just you - if her father was Albus, why would she be afraid of Daddy? Thanks for reading, I've got the next two chapters written and the one after nearly done, so I'll post them asap - problem is HPFF only allows one chapter in the queue at a time and I have more fics in progress. I'll be as quick as the site allows me :) Report Review
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