i read and i am now reviewing! what more could you ask for?
just kidding! this chapter wasnt half bad!
good job!Author's Response: thankx :) I'm glad you that it was and that it wasn't bad Report Review
I liked this chapter! but because i reviewed, you have to do something for me! review mine!
anyway, good writing but a couple of grammatical errors. But a great story. 7/10Author's Response: I will review urs :) thankx for leaving me a review :) Report Review
aw, that was absoloutly great, IM FIRST TO REVIEW, woot, so cool, i like it, =]
love lou aka xxx_firesparks_xxx Author's Response: thankx so much for being the first to review and for reviewing at all..... i promise it get's much better and plz tell other people about this story and ask them to leave a review thankx again...pinkrose Report Review
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