Interesting! I wish you added a bit more detail; it was a bit short. Other than that, it was a great one shot! I liked how you phrased that part "All gray. Never clear." that was a wonderful line. Good job! =]Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I've always wanted to add more to it, but at the time that was all I was inspired to do. I have more ideas for this fic now, but seeing as college is sucking all my time up, to the point where I barely have time to see my friends, let alone write Out of my Element (which has been bouncing around in my head for a couple of months now) I doubt this will be re-vamped anytime in the near future.
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It was good but i,d have been happier if it was longer. Thanks.Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah it's mucho short, but that was all I was inspired to do. Maybe one day I'll go back and flesh it out a little.
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Interesting little fic you've got here
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this is great!
I enjoyed hearing her reasoning behind declaring him dead.Author's Response: Thanks! I thought it was curious, her pronouncing him dead when he wasn't. So I thought that she deserved her own itty-bitty fic.
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I feel sorry for Narcissa, stuck in the middle between Bellatrix and Andromeda. Great story! I wish it could have been longer because you're a great writer :) Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I, too feel bad for Narcissa. I jus think she was dealt a bad hand and is always trying to make the best of it.
Sorry about the lenght,
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Who the hek is dead?Author's Response: Read 'Deathly Hallows' Chapter 36. and you'll know where the last three lines are from. ;-) Report Review
hey! i liked this! i always thought she was good and just sucked into an evil life! great job!Author's Response: Thanks. I thought that as well, and I feel that Deathly Hallows really proved it to. Dispite all her flaws she really does love her son and will do anything for him.
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