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This chapter waz really good I wonder why
Luv DrayAuthor's Response: Dray,
You can be so selfcentered sometimes. But we as in Nikki and I still love you. Thanks for the review.
-Your sister-in-law and her mother,
PS If in our story Dray's mother is Bellatrix then she's going to be going out with her cousin, Draco.
-Ray and Nikki Report Review
Only use my idea if u want itAuthor's Response: I will I am So glad you're back Report Review
I have read the 7th book 4xs now and I know all about Teddy and poor poor Fred and the 1 eared George -Ha. I thought a good idea for the story was this : The two girls followed the boys to Lunch and went their seprate ways to their tables. Saya was quiet the whole time wishing she could sit with her father they were very close. Ocean on the other hand was talking up a storm to all her fellow Hufflepuffs about how great the Ancient Greek class was with Sirius teaching. Jake wasn't hungry and just played with his food and wand trying to make it soar across the ceiling but only managed to hit someone in the head with it. Jason sat quietly eating and trying not to catch anyones eye conntact especally Pancy's for some reason she had daggers for him he didn't know why then finally Lunch was over and the trio met up after. But Saya was missing
"Have you seen Saya?" Ocean remarked the two boys shook their heads
"Are you sure? Lets go find her she might be with Sirius." Ocean said bitting her thumb nail
They all looked in the Ancient Greek classroom, the teacher's table in the Great Hall, the corridors, all the bathrooms (well at least Ocean checked those), even the Chambers of Secrets (which had nothing harmful anymore).
"Where could she be?" Jason sighed
Then Jake sat up exsitedly "How about the Black Lake?!"
"Lets try" Ocean said
And they all went.Author's Response: Love the idea Dray. I think I might just use it. Thanks. And is anyone else has ideas or if they would like to add to this one please please tell me. :D Report Review
I love your work as usual. And right now I'm really happy :) that I got a computer to use! I have missed u over the summer 100%. And Ray dear if I may add I might be getting a dog! (This is is my description of what I want it to be) :All black a good personality and likes my father cause if the dog isn't nice to him my dad is going to flip! And I want to name it Padfoot :) Forever DrayAuthor's Response: Go you and naming your dog Padfoot Report Review
Nice story chapter :) One question: why aren't harry/other members of the Trio in the character listing for your story?Author's Response: I duno, and thanks. :D Report Review
Very Random And Where Is HERMIONEAuthor's Response: I dont know where Hermione is Report Review
I like the idea of elementals and gods but i'm a bit confused. Harry knows Remus and Tonks in his second year? And why does't Jake share his father surname just stuff like that that makes it confusing. Its a good idea and story. Just a tad bit confusing. Also you spell Gryffindor wrong.
P.S. Since i want to see how many nicknames people can think up for me... feel free to give me a nickname. Author's Response: Harry's parents are alive so that's why he knows Remus and Tonks. Jake doesn't share Remus's surname because Remi knew Jakes mother and thr elementals in my story don't share the name of either parents. It's confusing i know. And I like Frankie for your name Report Review
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