the story is nice so far I hope you update soon Report Review
Very good chapter with strong descriptions and feelings. You pulled this off very well - CONGRATULATIONS!
Keep up the wonderful writing. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.Author's Response: Thank you for the review, its appreciated believe me. I've gotten caught up temporarily in other writing commitments but I've managed to get those squared away and Ch. 3 is about 75% complete. I've been struggling a bit with the upcoming scene where Ginny and Harry explain their bond to Ron, Hermione and the others. On the one hand part of me thinks those two would be rather infuriated to hear Harry and Ginny were experimenting with sex magic the day after Ron was viciously attacked. On the other I could see them being very curious and/or supportive. When I manage to break my creative deadlock on that the chapter will be finished in minutes. Report Review
Very strong start, Arcadian. Good dialogue, believable scenes, and proper characterization. This story shows real promis. I can't wait for the next installment!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review :)
I had chapter 2 up for validation, but fell afoul of the formatting rule about starting new paragraphs if more than 1 character is speaking. I've edited it and just waiting for the submission freeze to end so I can re-submit. Glad you enjoyed the beginning, keep your eye out for more. I'm up to Chapter 12 on my computer. Report Review
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