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Review #1, by edenvirg Behind Bars

4th August 2007:
Hello. :) It's a good idea to dwell on what Sirius must have been thinking while he was in Azkaban (and he was probably thinking about how he landed there), but I think you could have added more depth to the story by not patterning this one-shot too much on canon. You could also have this story looked over by a beta; doing so really does wonders for one's work. Well, hope you continue writing! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice! I really might take your advice! Thanks a ton! dolphine

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