I love it! Great use of figurative languege! By why havent you finished it yet? Its a shame to see a great piece not finish! Please finish it!! PRETTY PLEASE! Report Review
Great Story! Will there be More? Report Review
Wonderful story, i love Teddy and Victorie together. Report Review
Update please! That's really all I can say. I love, love, love this story, and I want it to be finished like ASAP so that I don't go insane with want-to-know-what-happened- itis. Just one little thing; at the end, when Teddy is walking away, is he going towards the forest or the school? I wasn't too sure. Great story, and once again, please update real soonlike. Report Review
Love this fic, good job :D Report Review
this story is really good. i hope you'll update soon :) Report Review
great story keep up with it!! Report Review
its great man really appreciable please hurry up n complete dis. Report Review
I love your story, and just want to point something out: in the first chapter you said that Victoire's eyes were brown, but in this one they are blue... 10/10Author's Response: Ahaha did I? ^_^ Uggh lack of continuity. Thanks so much for pointing that out to me, I'll have to change it. But for the record, I think they're brown :P Report Review
love it, love it, love it! I'm not a member, but I was until I lost my password and my username and I didn't know that the computer won't let, I don't know, long story. Keep writing this! I love, and I really want to become a publisher or author someday. And from how your writing it sounds like you want to too. My name's Jessie by the way. I want to look at more stories, but keep writing and I really wish the 5th chapter would be up soon. How about you try, and notice I said try, to write some stories about Remus and Tonks. How did you like the 7th book? I loved it. Gotta go. Bye!Author's Response: Awww thanks so much! :S An author? I'm not really sure. I'd probably like to do something a bit more creative... HA. What could be more creative than being an author ^_^ I don't know. I'm thinking of advertising... I'm not really sure. But look at me rambling. Thank you so much! There's going to be much more of Remus/Tonks in this story... I'm sorry I haven't really explored that yet :S... I loved the 7th book, but found it a bit confusing, to be honest. Oh, and good luck becoming an author/publisher! You sound like one of my friends =) Report Review
awww hahahahahaha i loved this! "Wotcher Teddy!" awww so cute sooo gooodd keep it up!Author's Response: Thanks! =) Report Review
Please update really soon! I love this story and let me tell you, if I can't get into a story if the first chapter doesn't grab me. This one did, and so have all the others! Keep it up!Author's Response: Aww thanks! i love getting awesome reviews like yours! Report Review
i like it.maybe shudent have left the convo between Tonks and Teddy at a cliff hanger! :D Yeah this is difficult.the dead always border on impossible don't they? :) But the writing is still excellent and the plot as delightful as ever! :D So no worries-all you need is sum time to cum up with the ideas u need :D id rely love it if u wud update thoughee! :D but no worries-writing comes only at your own pace! :) Rating: 10/10 From light_blueAuthor's Response: You're awesome.I love hearing from you =) Thanks! Report Review
i like it! please update soon and pleasa read my story too! i can't really remember what it is called because i have it on a couple different sites and i changed the name on a couple of them so if you want to read it go to my profile and check it out! your story rocks like the beatles! and if you don't like the beatles, you have the liberty to rock like anybody you like! sorry, i'm rambling, but i'm really bored, so, if i could give you a higher rating i would, possibly a 63! okay, now i'm done!Author's Response: Awww, thanks! You totally made my day! You rock like the Beatles too hun =) And i haven't sen this review yet, so I'm going to check out your story right now =)) Report Review
that's cool, another chapter please, i love itAuthor's Response: thank you! Sure, it'll be up soon =P Report Review
YAY I 've been waiting for you to add a chapter this is one of my favorite stories.. please post another ch. soon..Author's Response: Awww thanks hun! You're very sweet ^_^ Report Review
oh my god, really really good! please update soon!! can't wait for the next chapter! by the way, i liked Jame's little rhyme. Author's Response: Lols thanks.I don't think it was very good, but that's just me ^_^ Thanks! Next chappie in validation! And sorry I took so long to reply! Report Review
umm this chapter was a little ackward if you know what i mean, but other than that it wa samazing.. i really like this concept and my friend and i freaked out whe we saw that you updated so please update again, and faster! =]Author's Response: :P obviously it was awkward, i had no idea what to write about =D But I do have a plan for chapter 5 so i'll try and make it better. But thanks for reviewing and thanks for being so honest with me. ily =D Report Review
Yup. I'm in programming. ^_^ Anyway, what a sweet chapter! Teddy gets to talk to his parents. aw. It just made me smile. ^___^ oooh, and I SNAG THE 100th REVIEW! I think. teeheehee congrats hun! Author's Response: woooooot! there's no better person for the 100th review :D:D and thanks! Report Review
xD. i love little james. *tackle hugs him* infact, i love all the potters! and harry! *hugs harry in a -friendly- manner as to not get ginny upset* the harry and fleur moment made me cry ): and i'm in school. witch. :) loved it penni! *hugs and cookies*Author's Response: 'hugs harry in a -friendly- manner as to not get ginny upset' Oh Mary, I'm actaully afraid of what you'd do to Harry if it werent for Ginny :P Or actually, Dan. Haha. But thaaaaaaaaanks! Report Review
Aww, it's nice to see the other side of Fleur, and it was given more emphasis coz she had the moment with Harry. It never crossed my mind that fleur could be an eye-opener to Harry, but I guess I sometimes see a bit (or more) of Mrs.Weasley in her. lol And James was so funny! He seems to be the very much alike his namesake. I can imagine the Weasley-Granger-Potter family as really close-knit, and I can really see it in your story! They're just so adorable! Well, we all get our busy days. It's alright. The wait's worth it with the fantastic chapters you come up with. ;-) Author's Response: =) I love Fleur. Thank you so much! You make my day =DD Report Review
I really like your story, thank god you finally updated!! Poor Remus...that was kinda sad. Heehee. Please update soon!!Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, poor Remus. Report Review
good job! and please, please, please, please,please update soon!Author's Response: Thanks. And I'll try! I really will! Report Review
Awsome, Update soon! Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
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