it was nice.i liked it.u showed sirius as a true gentleman and not a sexy snogger.
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That was really short and sweet i liked it alot!
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Pretty good. Maybe you should do a sequel where they encounter each other "beyond the veil". That would be cool.Author's Response: Ya i guess i could i never thopught about adding asequel to that thanks
Aw, sad-ish but sweet one-shot! :D
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Loved it, girlfriend! Very sweet. And somehow the name Leigh Sanders sounds familiar...lol.
Oh, and you're getting better with the grammar, but let me remind you...yeah is spelled yeah, not yea or ya. You know I love you, but that irks me. :)
RMLAuthor's Response: Thank you very much!!! Love ya!
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Oh wow, that's really good! I was definitely not expecting that ending...how brilliant! It's really sad, too. You made me feel for this character even though we only knew her for one chapter. I can't stand James/Lily (there's only one person that Lily belongs with and he's Snape) but you did a good job with them. Great story,thanks for doing the challenge and crediting me! 10/10
DiandraAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review. I loved doing this story Report Review
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